All Comments on 'Bryan's New Girlfriend'

Oh the possibilities! Well written, nicely built up w/ the right amount of background and character development. Looking forward to the sequel.

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I really enjoyed this. It was happy and good fun. Either you have an amazing imagination or you are speaking from experience. In any case, this was good entertainment. I like when a story containing this type of subject matter being presented in this way. I could see and hear the people clearly in the theater of my mind. I see no major grammatical stumbling points. Excellent writing, sir. Thank you.

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70 years, large and still enjoying life,

Chuck

It is either Brenden.or bryan not both.

JLC

It is Bryan - some of my stories are written for publication and then I switch names. I have a "Find / Replace" function but it misses one every so often and so do I.

Thanks for the comment Chuck, I appreciate it. For those reading this, it's part of a series that begins with "An Empty House and a Full Pussy" and ends with "Heather's Honeymoon." A new series has begun and Heather also appears on occasion in the "Vickie's Venture" series, including Chapter 4.

Best wishes to all

~~BrettJ

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