All Comments on 'Bum's Rush Ch. 04'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now9 months ago

Another great chapter to this fine tale!

1stltdan1stltdan9 months ago

Love you story line so much, more then just sex but the sex is great also. Thank you many more chapters please.

Frankie1952Frankie19529 months ago

I was thinking I have read ch3 before. did you repost a previous one in error?

TrampsAnThievesTrampsAnThieves9 months agoAuthor

#4 is new; #3 had more tecnhical issues. I apologize - but I didn't have any control over the situation.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love it

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved/loving the series - it’s escapist dreaming at a very high level.

Please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

story is great.. very detailed with a great character lineup. but , i feel like there should be at least two chapters to let us know that everything is or, is not ok, with both tribes, and family. my mind tells me that all building efforts are well and peace is established. you know how to tell us all about it....thks

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Don't stop now. Great story!

MidwestSouthernerMidwestSoutherner9 months ago

Looking forward to #5 after marathon reading session today.

Loving it so far.

Waiting on the babies and the bad guys to show up.

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