All Comments on 'Cali Diaries'

I wish I could give you a star for every orgasm this gave me, but they only allow 5 stars. This story is out of this world hot; you consistently outdo yourself with every new publication. I love you, baby girl! Keep up the great work.

Fuck I have jerked my dick off 3 times to this already. Please! Don't stop! You and skye have done it again. I cannot wait for her and your version of the next saga! Need more from Brittney and Sky!!!!!

Love the diary style

You continue to out do yourself Brittni.

Sapphic sensuality? - YES!

That special je ne sais quois of first time love? - YES!

Two hot young ladies and a big cock - YES!

And so much more . . .

Amazingly crafted long love session by a lustful kinky incredibly passionate mind..

Great attention to details fueled by one incredible imagination...

XXX JD

I love the way you capture the beautiful dynamic between two young women discovering lesbian sex! I also love the fact that you are writing this in parallel with Skyesub's series so that the reader may compare and contrast... a marvelous and innovative literary device! More of this PLEASE!

Can you or Kristie ever write anything that is not a 5-star story? Not until we are allowed to rate one 10 stars or more! Well done. Five stars for an arousing tale well crafted by a woman that obviously knows her way around both cunts and cocks. Definitely an inspiration for an ejaculatory tribute! Mmm!

Amazing collaboration! I love how well done this is and the two perspective things done by each author. Yet again, this was so well written even when trying something slightly new! Great job!

Wouldn’t let me log in. -Revenant1

Chapter 1

Such a hot story, full of kinky, juicy details, with great build-up and characterization. I really enjoyed reading it. You described the mutual attraction between yourself and Kristie so well. I especially liked how you two kissed and humped each other in the ladies' room, and the way you fucked after washing cars together. The way you described pleasuring yourself was so intense. I'm so fucking hard now. My favorite parts were: "While we were nearly tearing down the sink with our kissing, I jumped into her arms, and we stumbled into a stall while she desperately yanked my shirt and bra up around my neck. It was all so passionate and hot that I was dripping wet in my panties under my skirt. She sucked my nipples like a maestro orchestrating her band. Placing her hip against my panty clad pussy, she grinded my clit in the perfect spot. We were animals in heat but it was more than that. I felt we were releasing pent up passion for each other that we needed to explore.

Never had I felt something as perfectly hot and sexy as the way she feverously sucked and licked my tits while rubbing my clit with her leg. In no time, I was cumming in my panties; Kristie followed my lead and came without any direct contact. It was the most passionate experience of my life, and it cemented my growing feelings for her. Despite knowing we both could have continued for hours, we needed to get back to the guys.

Once our clothing and makeup were straightened, we made plans for her to come over my house on Sunday and wash our cars. We kissed more which tempted me to grab her and started back up again, but I knew we were limited with space and time. Kristie and I have pecked lips in friendship and even play-kissed a few times, but it was now that she proved to me just how good a kisser she always has been. Her lips are like velvet and I cannot wait to have them again. Until next time...Kisses."

And

"While rustling around on the plastic bags; I bunched three pillows behind me to elevate my head. I needed to start off with some stimulation to get myself wet. With legs spread and knees bent, I began with just my middle finger. Sliding it slowly up and down my slit between my folds, I looked toward the ceiling while fantasizing it was Kristie's long warm tongue. Dipping it deeper with each stroke, I sloshed my own juices so I could imagine I was hearing her tongue making me wetter. At that time, I needed penetration and I forced my finger inside my pussy as deep as it could go before wiggling it on my g spot. My eyes were closed tight lost in my imagination and I was going to cum dreaming of her tongue fucking my pussy. Not long after, I dug my heels into the trash bags, clenching my entire body so tight I felt like I could bend my belly ring. Cumming hard, I grunted with my mouth closed while enjoying the sensation of my walls spasming around my finger.

Once I had recovered, I pressed the hair brush handle to my clit. Shifting my thoughts to Kristie climbing on top of me wearing a strap-on dildo; I imagined she first grinded her knee on my pussy. Her weight was resting on my body with her fantastic shapely tits pressed to mine, and this fueled my lust as I began to rub my clit more forcefully. I felt that familiar pressure build and I added sex talk to put me over the edge.

"Fuck me, Kristie! Do it... just like that! Yes! Yes! You know what I like... right there! Make me fucking squirt all over this bed!"

My dirty language in combination with my fantasy set me over the top. My taint flexed from deep within as my squirt streamed out, it arched over the bed, hit the floor before trailing off and splashed noisily all over the trash bags. Unable to stop there, I scrubbed my clit like I was trying to remove a stain before grunting loudly and launching another stream of lady fluid across the plastic. The puddles of liquid were so voluminous they glistened under the light, but I was not finished."

So hot. Keep up the great work, you are very talented, and kinky. I can't wait for more.

So fucking hot. You and Kristie just can't get enough of each other. I liked the build up, how you kept fantasising about Kristie and also having second thoughts about acting on it, until you finally gave in. I especially liked how you made her cum in her jeans. The part where you pushed that nine-inch dildo in your wet pussy was also really hot. My favorite part was: "Grabbing her head, I planted my lips to hers in a kiss that would have never allowed air to escape let alone allowing her to finish her question. I was laying several days of pent up lust on her that could only be stifled for so long. She tried to pull away to speak but I only tightened my grip and denied her attempt. Using my tongue to probe deep in her mouth, I tried to force it past her tonsils as though I was overcompensating to get as close to her as I could. I was drunk, in love and needed to grudge fuck her to expel my frustrations.

Without breaking our sealed lips, I ripped open her stylish flannel shirt as the buttons went bouncing onto the hard floor. Yanking it down, over her shoulders, her shirt followed the tiny round plastic saucers to the floor. My tits pressed to her chest and after pulling her black shirt over her head, I unzipped her sports bra, allowing it to fall. Kristie has an amazing body and her C cup tits are at the top of that list for assets. I was determined and she knew it. I had a different look in my eyes. It was a combination of remorse and regret driven to be exorcised by lust and controlling her sexually. I needed to be dominant to heal my transgression and prove my feelings for her.

I moved her with my body while we kissed. I feel kissed is not a strong enough word to describe what we were doing. Our mouths were fighting against one another for supremacy as our heads continued to shift sides while attempting to suck out the other's breath. It was pure lust and passion on steroids. Once the back of her thighs met the bed's edge, I kept pushing until she tumbled onto her back. In a dash, I was on top of her, mauling her lips while my hanging hair cocooned our faces.

Taking my hands, I kneaded her firm tits while progressively squeezing them together. Forcefully, I dug my lips into her neck and labeled myself out of control as I attached them to her sweet smelling skin. Her head tossed back as she arched her back on the bed, exposing more of her neck for my mouth. I might have been in control of Kristie but I was certainly not in control of myself. I was consumed with her body and desired to be consumed. I had made a decision to not allow barriers to block my feelings for her and that realization drove me.

It was difficult to move my sucking lips, but I managed to get them down to her tits. With the scent combination of her natural skin and a hint of perfume resting in her cleavage, I could have spent an hour there without moving. My mouth had to march on and I latched onto her left nipple so tight that you would have thought I was trying to swallow it. I could not get enough and I switched nipples back and forth to create a satisfying symmetrical sensation. If humanly possible, I would have sucked both tits simultaneously. She moaned her approval and that cued me to start in on my hip grind. I was wearing tight white Capri pants which afforded me a solid feel of her crotch through her jeans."

So hot. And I liked the addition of humor here: "Not long after, Josh was also in the pool and Kristie was nowhere to be found and believe me, I kept looking. When Billy brought me my 6th beer, I was pretty drunk by then. I was usually a happy drunk but tonight I couldn't shake my negative thoughts and that hope was dashed further when I spotted Brad and Josh flirting with the two biggest whores in town. Both girls were named Sarah by coincidence and each had gotten a boob job recently. Welcome to southern California. Ugh."

Keep up the great work. I can't wait to get to the rest. I'm so turned on.

Chapter three

So fucking hot. I liked the way you reminisced about imagining you had a dick, and wanting to fill Kristie up with your seed. I especially liked the way you gagged Kristie with your panties while you fucked her from behind, having her moan against the fabric while licking your juices off it. You're a bad girl. Your dirty talk was great too. Letting Kristie be on the top next and ride you was nice. Zek showing up the next morning was an interesting development. I liked the way you teased him. Looking forward to read about the threesome. My favorite part was: "Moving back behind her in a more traditional doggystyle position, I pounded harder than ever before. Our bodies slapped together so quickly it sounded like we were being applauded. When her pussy spasmed in another intense climax, I didn't stop. I wanted her to experience multiple orgasms from the forceful fucking she was receiving.

"Cum again! Do it slut! Cum again...I know you want to! Blast all over this dick! Oh yeah...there you go! Let it out! Don't hold back...make that pussy spasm!" Slap..slap..slap..slap could be heard throughout the room. The bed thumped in unison.

When she would lower her head, extend her stifled grunt through my panties, I knew she was cumming again. The more she orgasmed, the longer the trail of white cum would ooze down her thigh but the consistency would not allow it to drip. I found that so hot and it only fueled my desire to pound harder. I continued to feed her my inches while my dick was also basted in her slime for more lubrication. My sweaty tits were slapping my chest. I cannot remember how long we stayed in that position but Kristie must have cum four or five times. I was drenched in sweat and struggled to breathe. It was the world's best workout.

When I pulled out, I giggled mockingly, "You need to see this! Your pussy is used up, almost ruined. The gape is so wide, Josh will echo when he goes down on you. He will know that you belong to me and if you aren't a good girl, I might even reach in there and spray paint, Britt was here."

I needed to cum again so I commanded my submissive, "You are going to ride me and ride me hard. You need to make me cum so I'm going to need you to do your best to clench that stretched pussy around my cock like you did earlier. I know it's loose and flabby...I get that...but you need to put those kagels to good use." I pulled my wet panties out of her mouth and warned, "If you think you can keep your slut mouth under control, I will keep these out. It's ok if my pussy musk is on your tongue...that will make the beer taste even better.""

I leaned back against the headboard but that wasn't going to work with the way I had the dong inside me. I had to lay on my back, tilt my pelvis so that she could sit on it without it popping out of me. Kristie was shaky but able to stand and straddle my lap. She was the perfect height and I needed to taste that cum. I pressed my tongue to where the cum trail ended and hungrily slurped it up like a vacuum. It was so tangy and fulfilled my craving. I even cleaned her swollen lips. When my licking had ended, she lowered herself while I held my dick up by the base. Her aim was perfect on the first try and it slipped into her without much resistance.

She gasped once she was completely impaled on the massive dong. She needed to regain strength in her legs but soon found herself riding with enthusiasm. I reached up, held her hips and helped her take as much as I could offer. Propelling my hips upward to meet her bounces created that feel that I was searching for. All I could think about was shooting another load up her pussy.

Little did Kristie know, I had not swallowed her cum from when I had cleaned her up. When she began to ride me, I smiled and after a wink, I showed her the contents in my mouth. Her eyes widened, and when I swirled my tongue around and swallowed, she slammed herself down on the dick with great force. After pausing for a second, she stood up, allowing the thick rubber to slide out and she scrubbed her clit side to side.

A loud scream started to leave her mouth then she tightened her lips to block the noise, "Eeeeemmmmmmmmmmmm!" She squirted her liquid all over my face and down my neck. She tried to remain standing until she finished but was physically unable. She slumped back down on my lap, missing my dick but shook uncontrollably."

So hot. Keep up the great work. I am so hard right now.

So fucking hot. Great ending to a great story. You and Kristie are two horny, kinky, hot girls. Zeke sounds really hot too, we could have some fun LOL. Reading this made me so hard. I especially liked the part where you sucked Zeke off after he fucked Kristie, and when you licked Kristie's boobs clean. My favorite part was: "She slid off my face, so her wet pussy was sandwiching one of my tits and stooped low while pressing her boobs together just above my pussy. He pulled out and beat his meat just in time to shoot his cum all over her tits, landing first in her cleavage then painting each one. It was an impressive second load. He was able to cover each tit significantly with a mess sticking to her left nipple. He let out a relief bellow as he shook his content.

Kristie looked him and I instructed, 'Zeke...it was pleasure doing business with you but it's now time for you to get the fuck out!"

I couldn't help but giggle as he slipped his clothes back on. Soon Kristie was straddling my stomach while hanging her wet tits over my face. She shook her chest, allowing her boobs to sway back and forth and Zeke's cum to rain down on my face. I was trying my best to lick it up before she lowered her cum covered nipple to my mouth for me to suck off. I eagerly cleaned it and licked the rest of her boobs clean.

What a fucking night! After Kristie and I dressed, we went looking for our boyfriends, only to find Josh passed out in a lawn chair by the pool and Brad sleeping on the couch in the basement. Kristie and I hugged and kissed. I whispered, "I love you and I will come over tomorrow for lunch." I air quoted lunch as she smiled.

We both went to our respective boyfriends and woke them up to take us home. When Brad woke up, I said, "Take me home! I'm tired!"

He tried to be sweet and ask, "Do you want to fuck?"

I paused, looked at Kristie leaving, and then replied, "Nah...I'm good...I'm real good."

What a night...Kisses"

Keep up the great work, you are very talented and kinky. I jerked off so hard to this.