All Comments on 'CJ, Lana and My Daughter Holly'

What a disgusting, amoral, far-fetched piece of writing.

I loved it.

Glad to see you're still cranking them out, Brett.

Just a great story altogether. Truly well written. My wife and I look forward to your next installment. Mabe you could have the mother come by to check on what Holly's been up to and have her entangled in a bondage session.

Just one issue with the story. During the four-way, Holly and Lana swapped in the middle but no explanation as to when. At one point CJ was kissing Holly while her dad was eating her out then CJ leaned over and started licking Holly's lips where she was sucking his cock. Then Holly fell away from him and started fell away from him and joined Lana in sucking his cock.

Otherwise a great story.

It's nice to see stories take place in the T-dot ;)

great story. loved the beginning. nice tease and twist. i know its been a while, but how about another chapter? i can't get enought of Lana, CJ and Holly!

Omg what would I not give to be part of this hedonistic and depraved orgy. I so adore cunt, eating and fucking cunt is my favourite pleasure along with being drunk on cunt juice and fuck lust. The more I get the more I want. My live in fuck buddies and I will act out this story till we all pass out from the insane pleasure and exhaustion. Cunt crazed sex maniac Lanc’s UK.