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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Let's get the names straight!

Pretty good, but there was a lot of confusion in a couple of places where 'K.C.' was used when it should have been 'Casey'. I look forward to part 2 ...

BrettJBrettJover 10 years agoAuthor
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Thanks for your comment, but I am wondering if perhaps you misread some spots? I checked through it and I couldn't see any "K.C. / Casey" errors although there are some that might be able to be misinterpreted. I am glad you liked, not sure if there will be another. This one was written as a one-off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Brill

Oh sucking fucking wonderful. My two girls and I sucked and fucked each other into next week twice over having recovered from passing out from the insane levels of pleasure we reached. Love to have you direct a sucking fucking orgy for my girl friends and I.

Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc's uk

RoguesladyRoguesladyover 10 years ago

great read!!! Loved it as I do all of yours!

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