All Comments on 'Corruption Ch. 01'

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Want23exploreWant23explore10 months ago

This is an amazing story on its own and even better as the start of what promises to be an intriguing series. Well done

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This story is off to a GREAT start. I read can’t wait to read more. Please don’t make us wait too long!!! Love corruption themes!

Nzq11Nzq1110 months ago

Off to a great start, looking forward to the next

hendu13hendu1310 months ago

EXCELLENT start! Please continue!

lobotomistlobotomist8 months ago

My favourite from you. please continue.

peterHarpeterHar8 months ago

just wow, very nice story, please continueee

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Please continue 🙏

mitchawamitchawa5 months ago

Incredibly well-written with excellent word choice and descriptions. The plot is different and has a long lead ., which clarifies the depth of the characters, and results in a fantastic, cdawn out, and unique sex scene The establishment of the rules of the relationship between Ellison and Max is a good ploy to use as an entry into the next chapter. Max getting her dream job is probably because of Ellison and adds intrigue to the continuing story.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

please pleaseee continuee

Cal59Cal59about 2 months ago

Love to see this finished, thanks!

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I used to make GIF captioned porn whenever I was free. Now I write stories for fun, mostly about submission, betrayals, and uneven dynamic roles. None of what I write reflects my morals. I just do these for fun. Lesbian, gay, straight; I'll write about them all given time. U...