All Comments on 'Date Nights Ch. 01'

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loma38loma38about 1 month ago

A great story!Please keep writing

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 month ago

WARNING as a FYI. Before you commit to reading this story just know that this will now be the 8th Story that this author has started and leaves us hanging and asking for more. Time to complete a couple of them. Cheers

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 1 month ago

Great story.....she is an interesting sort. lol

Jordan45Jordan45about 1 month ago

Very hot story by one of the best authors on Lit. We need a follow up to Seven Days!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I loved the first version, this one is great as well - would love to see the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It’s just a repeat of the older version

Still pretty bad,fucking Warrenand then going back to Austin.

londonbondagelondonbondageabout 1 month ago

Make it more humiliating

Bham487Bham487about 1 month ago

It doesn’t really matter if he continues or not. He writes the same basic story over and over. Big cock stud fucks some slut and humiliates boyfriend/son/dad or whatever. Women are all fucked stupid and betray whoever to get getting off.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Ok, the story is good, but now there are 10 stories with only the 1 chapter and none of them have a continuation. I think it's time to complete at least one of them.

You can do it bro, "A Mom's Symbol" is damn good.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago
great potential

This story has great potential as a series. It would be great if it took a more in-depth and romantic/erotic direction, different from the typical story that the author produces.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

Great story! It will be fun to watch Stacey slowly fall for Warren instead!

shadrachtshadracht6 days ago

Woof. Who would've guessed is a great story with characters who aren't just horrible people. So you can obviously do it. But for whatever reason you keep writing the same story over and over. Woman with a guy who treats her well (or otherwise is shown to have good qualities). Woman betrays everything she values for huge cock. Rinse. Repeat. 1*

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I used to make GIF captioned porn whenever I was free. Now I write stories for fun, mostly about submission, betrayals, and uneven dynamic roles. None of what I write reflects my morals. I just do these for fun. Lesbian, gay, straight; I'll write about them all given time. U...