All Comments on 'Flyover Country Ch. 02'

Just keeps getting better. Five stars.

to Chapter 1.

Nice job, Mr. Horn. I look forward to chapter 3.

There are so few written any more. Cuck shit or a chainsaw massacre is all we seem to get. Finally a real entertaining story about a character who is just a good guy trying to live his life. Great story and I gave you 5 stars.

To you that interrupts this whale of a tale.

Why was it necessary to burn down the houses?

LW has been a vast wasteland for sometime, but the reaction to this story demonstrates that well written, quality stories have an audience and are appreciated. We should all be very grateful that he has returned to the scene of the crime and is sharing his talent so unselfishly. There are a few really good writers on Lit, and Longhorn is right up there with the best.

I can hardly wait to see what he writes for Q's August event! Imagine Q and Longhorn posting the same day. That reminds me. Q is still trying to get Laurel to post the last part of his last story, The Food Desert, that somehow was lost in transition. The story is complete and was sent in, but never made it to a screen near you. It is hoped she will either post the rest of the story or repost it all at once, as he intended. Q is the man on Lit with all sorts of Hall of Fame stories. This site needs to get his stories posted properly. He's very good for business here!

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Are you planning to post this on SOL as well?

"She's helped me see that decisions I make have consequences down the line and they affect lots more people than just me," - She needed a counselor to see that?

I was was afraid he was going to let Faye back into his life!

Her second cousin works with his ex-wife and she now knows some dirt on the ex. That might be awkward!

Why would Steph be upset by "clothing optional?" Mercedes wouldn't have said it if she thought it would upset her.

I was wondering if Faye's "escapade" was going to be brought up. He handled it just as I would have suggested.

I was expecting a Mercedes/Steph session with the double-ended strap-on!

I hope by the end he and the girls end up together!

A well written, good story of an interesting character, with unexpected twists, leaving you wondering where this will go. 5*

keep going you are doing a great job

Other than she did what she did because she could it doesn't explain what led up to her taking that action? They were allegedly happily married so what sparked that desire or attitude?

I guess I will keep reading hoping at some point comes to light.

In USA, aircraft call signs start with N (november) but it is unspoken most of the time, then numbers, followed by letters. Not more than 7 total digits, no more than 2 of which are letters at the end. Example: N1234AB, November 1234 Alpha Bravo. Shortened to 4 Alpha Bravo after first contact.

Love this story. I did not expect him to lose Merci at the end of this, maybe he will find her again. Looking forward to tomorrow and another installment. I could follow this longer than the four you have planned. Keep up the good work. Your talent is above and beyond!

keep up the amazing flow of words

so far so good ... please i beg you don`t ruin it for me by taking back the ex

5* 1000 hard ons and an orgasm or two

Sick nasty chapter, Longhorn. As good as anything you've written, and as good as anything anyone else has ever written. Now, if Lit would actually take some action to correct the gaffe with Q's story, we could have two great stories ongoing. Looking forward to chapter 3. Thanks for posting, Randi.

You write quite well but I hope this chapter was not just a diversion inside of the whole story. Will you fit this episode into the whole story or is this just a quick two pieces with two hot babes? Obviously Faye must know what was probably happening and she is not divorced from this part of Matt's life.

Looking forward to the next two segments so please don't disappoint.

T.T.

It's amazing how when you're not bitter, not focusing on how to screw the ex over or even what the ex is up to or hoping that they're suffering, good things happen to you. We all have shit happen to us. How we absorb the blows and moved forward makes all the difference.

Matt and Stephanie discuss how their having a threesome was different than what Faye did with the other two. However, there was even a more important parallel that was not explored. Even though Matt, Mercy and Steph have a great connection and all three seemed like they wanted to explore a life together, he brought up that the girls needed to explore their passion and what they've strove for all their lives. And even though he wasn't encumbered by a job or even a residence he didn't want to tag along as the girls traveled around pursuing their dance careers. They made their decisions logically and not emotionally, thinking of the long term good for all three.

So was that the issue with the marriage with Faye? They both had loved one another, but Faye wasn't ready to stop exploring and be completely settled down yet? By my mid-20's I had had three very deep love relationships and each could have easily led to marriage, but I knew that I wasn't ready (or simply didn't want to) settle down and left all three relationships. Was it as simple a 21 year old Faye loved Matt, but was simply not ready to make a life long commitment, and wasn't mature enough to give up a love to continue living life on her own terms until she got to the phase of her life where she was ready to settle down? Also, Matt able to recognize that the girls would someday regret giving up their dreams for a relationship with him, because of his experience with Faye. Had he now acquired the wisdom to recognize the girls weren't ready to settle down; whereas, his younger version hadn't had the same maturity to recognize the same thing in Faye?

There are many reasons people cheat and one reason is simply wanting to have the security and love derived from a committed relationship, but not quite willing to live a fettered life. Sometimes you can have only one or the other, sometimes with honesty with your partner you can have both. Trying to have both by deceiving the partner is where all the problems lie.

I'm sure I'm not the only one that wants to see all three find their way back to one another down the road when they're ready. But then we don't know yet what adventures lie ahead for Matt. By Matt not fully dealing with his relationship with Faye and putting those emotions in a box, is the author setting up a scenario for these two to get together again? Right now I can's see that happening for two reasons. First, the love they shared didn't seem like it was that great of a love from either side. Also, for that to happen Faye needs to be much more fleshed out and we need to see her growth much more closely to justify a reconciliation.

Two more acts. Very interested to see the adventures ahead for Matt.

Liked Your style and the mix of good and bad ... though changes between are somewhat fast ... maybe its realistic, just wondering ... anyway, it felt like an emotional rollercoaster at some times.

However, giving up his ranch and even burning the old ranch house was a bit drastic imho and made me feel sad :-(

Hope next chapter comes soon and leaves a brighter mood.

Wow that's a well written story so far .Please when your done with this story KEEP writing please we need it on here so bad. Thanks for the read

He meets this girl mercedes, they connect and have greatest sex and fun together then she invites her friend to stay with them and they all have a great 3 way.instead of love and marriage ,children,. They head out never to be heard from again. Strange . Only this writer knows where this is going . I thought he found the perfect wife. But that’s over.

Hope that somehow true love will prevail for him. Any chance for his ex?

I liked your older stuff, but there are too many cliches (e.g., country boy puts one over on that city slicker) and a dearth of real emotion in this.

You sure came back with a bang, didn't you?

Sad ending, but I do look forward to the rest.

Many people make this mistake.............

The correct spelling is areola and the plural (there's usually two:) is areolae

Enjoyed the second part much more than the first and look forward to more.

At this point the plot seems to be meandering. Each piece has been interesting, but I have no sense of those pieces coming together to make a coherent picture. In this installment, the confrontation with the ex lacked drama, and the immediate pickup of the new girl was ???

He inherits a ranch that he enjoys, but then sells ???

This story needs to get legs in a hurry to match its overinflated rating.

...for this reader, Longhorn.

I really enjoy your writing.

And I wouldn't mind one bit if Matt came

back with further adventures. I work in

aviation so the private pilot side of this

had me hooked. Keep up the good work

and thanks.

So she is wrong to sleep with others and not take his feelings into account, but he can do his own version of the same by posting illegally gained photos and video? What is up with that? It is a much too large logic hole for me. Why didn’t the people he shat on sue him or swear out a criminal complaint? Or Faye for that matter? What they did was not illegal. What he did was—so why is he so judgemental of Faye? Everything he says to her is pretty much applicable to him! I don’t think he is a good man, our Matt. He thinks that wronging someone who wronged him is OK A little self awareness would be nice... at the moment he is a BIG hypocrite.

that was hot ty for the read

No complaints from me I enjoyed it Immensely!...Can't wait for more..5 Stars★★★★★WOOF!

Q is qhml1, the guy on top of the novels Hall of Fame, and four stories in the top twenty Hall of Fame in Loving Wives. Q is the straw that stirs the drink. His body of work is second to none in Literotica. He is the guy Laurel has been ignoring after she posted only a portion of his last story for some inexplicable reason.

As for the having writers wait for an event to post, I say poppycock! Longhorn has this story with no event, Q tried to post one a few days ago, Todd drops stories randomly, as does Randi and Bebop. If a writer is dormant and Randi convinces them to write for an event, you reap the benefits. If you feel cheated that the good writers don't post more often, join the club. I would like to see a story every week from these guys and many others. Writers are donating their time and talent and you complain? What's in your library? How often do you post a story, or even an encouraging comment on stories my these good writers? Negativity is toxic and it can be contagious if allowed to spread. Work on a more positive outlook and be thankful for every good story posted here.

@Anonymous 06/19/19 Re: "Is this loving wives" - "They head out never to be heard from again." - How do you know that? This is only chapter 2. They're adults with commitments to keep, who's to say that they won't return?

@jakie1, "Any chance for his ex?" - God, I hope not!

@onlythelonelylove - Are you seriously equating posting videos of what they were doing IN PUBLIC, with her cheating on him?

Really glad to see you posting. I like your style of telling the story and the characters you develop.

I'm interested to see where this is all going because I know it's headed somewhere. I was really sad it wasn't somewhere with Mercedes. :-(

why doesnt he have enough cash to follow the two chicks and their dance company around? dance companies tour for a few years and then spend years working a new routine

how would that have been any different then when he was the one traveling for his job?

Outstanding writing ..

Matt seems to be doing pretty well post divorce. This is two great chapters, and I can't wait to read the next one. Hope Mercedes makes another appearance later on.

Too much extraneous detail that doesn't advance the plot. The prose reads well, though. Just too much of it.

Thanks for the question. It is in their backyard—the one with a fence. And the drone flyover & crash landing is illegal in Texas. No permission given in either case. Check it out...

But the storyline is screwed up. I can see selling everything off as he did but filling the pool and burning the house was a pure act of strangeness. Rent, lease, or let someone live there for free. A lot of people could use a roof over their heads.

I just noticed it's 4:00 AM, so I'll put the rest of it to bed until the next time. Five Stars!

Seems like everybody suddenly got into threesomes, seems a bit ludicrous, and after his marriage it seemed a bit weird that he would share a woman with anyone, even another woman.

The whole thing with Jake teaching him and apparently loaning out women felt really juvenile and ridiculous, like a sleazy teenage fantasy.

Nothing like dating ones self. If the folks were visiting Meteor Crater a few years ago I was the one changing the right rear flat tire in the heat on that long curve just before the Visitor's Center. Never got to visit with "...the girl in the flat bed Ford...", had to get the rental back and change it out for one with four good tires. Second time reading this already. Signed: BTW

I know he must be lost after 3 weeks with 2 smokin' hot women!!! And no homestead either? So sad..

...don't pretend to be a pilot. You have everything backwards...either research the subject or better yet get a real pilot to edit. Lots of corn in the story as well. Are we in Iowa?

"Well ... I guess I'm just not as perfect as some people," - He's not saying he's perfect. He's human, he'll make mistakes, we all do. But it's one thing to make a mistake, another reader questioned his posting (actually sending out) the pictures he took with the drone, and you can make a case that it was a wrong thing to do. But it's something else to deliberately do something that you KNOW is wrong, but figuring you're chances of getting caught are slim, and even if caught, you'll have a good chance of getting away with it.

Minor continuity error - He ushered her through the gate, THEN unlatched and opened it?

"I finally got to see Ginger at a full gallop with Mercedes atop her and her long black hair streaming out behind her." - Hadn't they already gone horseback riding before Steph was even there? "We did go riding on the fourth day"

I really get tired of these nit picking criticisms of writers on LIT. Most of the writers do it for fun and are not professionals. If you want perfect go buy a paper back or visit a library.

The really god writers, including this one write some great stories that are exciting and packed with action and also some romantic and sexy scenes. Their stories provide incites into our own and others lives and relationships. Read and enjoy if you don't like it don't read it. This writer is good this is my second time around this story and others he has written. Keep writing please!

Great story!

This chapter has Matt selling off his inheritance and meeting a possible soulmate. Love is in the air. Alas, Merci is devoted to her dancing career and leaves him. He burns his child hood home to the ground and heads to California. What is the plot?

He really sold completely out!!!

Damn fergie, I couldn't have said it better my self. Actually, I have but thank you for your words. I've read stories for nearly 60 years and always have supported the writers. Without them all we would have to read are instruction manuals and junk mail! Longhorn, some of us would enjoy a new tale, screw the damn nicpickers. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Isn't this supposed to be a loving wives story.? Doesn't seem to be that anymore. I don't see where this story is going now that he has got rid of his wife.

dont know whats sadder, losing the girls or burning the homestead.

damn theyre are some stupid critter critics. just read the story, enjoy and wait for what comes next. " i dont see where the story is going now that he has got rid of his wife", i dont either but the writing and story are good so im reading on.

What happened to Sherry?

interesting but kind of short on the divorce reasons. At least you used a paragraph or 2 to explain your post marriage 3some was different because of no vows of monogamy as in a marriage

2 stars - You lost my interest in your story in the middle of this chapter.

Sorry, BUT sharing my most significant other is not in my vocabulary.

So reading about couples sharing their significant other is off the table as well.

Neither is cuck, swinger, swap, threesome, foursome, BDSM, gay or lesbian activity.

House? What happened to 6 months and 1 day?!! Otherwise ok.rated 4 stars although like others I don't share And no slutty clothes in public. Mine And again don't share even looks!!!

Very good story!

1 This is my 2nd read on this and I'm like it as much as the 1st. I liked the divorce bit because we were short speed to the point and totally on the money philosophically.

The sharing bit plus reminders in my book given situation probably OK but not OK if I was married or in a committed relationship.

Just not going to share with that level.

I thought the Straight light hearted and with good continuity although it's extremely sad when he sold off the ranch and burned the house down; That's probably because I was racing in a ranch no longer have one what would kill to be able to have 1 again.

Very very good destroying I'm really liking it a lot.

LONG WINDED WRITING, WASTE OF TIME TO READ

Really enjoying the story, thank you.

@nixrox, you must have fallen asleep during Professor Matt's lecture. I'll reproduce it for you: "What we just did is different. It's the same sex, I agree with you there ... but none of us is married ... none of us is in another relationship so far as I know..." The girls both shook their heads. "...So none of us has committed to anyone else ... none of us is exclusive with anyone else, right?"

Mercedes wasn't Matt's 'most significant other', as you put it. Neither was Matt Mercedes'. They were Very Good Friends with benefits, and then they invited Stephanie, who was Mercedes' best friend and roommate. Then they ALL became Very Good Friends with benefits. It wasn't a couple sharing, it was three friends sharing, and that makes all the difference, something Faye couldn't/didn't figure out.

Great part 2. Thanks for writing.

How come Stephanie didn't get pregnant?.As a lesbian,she wouldn't be on the pill.

Enjoyed, as always. I’ve never understood why he sold the ranch to the oil company rather than the mineral rights, and Cocked Pistol is DEFCON 1, but neither detracts from the story.

Uh, nixrox, with all the stuff you listed that you don’t like, I don’t understand why you would even bother reading anything in the loving wives section. Maybe you’re a closet masochist? Just a thought. Great story so far, Longhorn. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good follow up, kept it in the same vane,

very good. just wondered about Sephanie thinking she was a lesbian and on the Pill? Don't quite understand burning the houses but oh well.

Wearing shorts with a stetson? When city folk try to write western lol

Most enjoyable.

The burning: when his parents left him the ranch they asked that he burn anything he did no longer wanted. He fulfilled their request.

Dang, I thought I was hooked with the 1st chapter then you went and drug me in deeper. Thank you again, Mike

Pleasant story once past Faye? good feeling b/w Mercy and MC. why burn the farm, why not get a deal that allowed him to live there fo 50 yrs? im jealous maybe? rk

Paradise in Texas. Two beautiful girlfriends who are close dancer girlfriends and a fully stocked ranch for a while. Nice closure with wonderful liberated stepparents. LUCKY.

I enjoyed the hell out of that chapter. The first chapter I kind of expected that the marriage would blow up, but him and Faye meeting up at the BBQ joint and agreeing they were done was good, Him hooking up with Merci and later her friend Stephanie was good for the soul. Full marks for this chapter.

I always start reading at Chapter 02 these days. But they are all five star specials.

Woo much virtue signaling it gets a bit annoying. Also, a Stetson with cargo shorts huh? I guess that's like the frat version of a cowboy?

Why is this in loving wives?