All Comments on 'Her Auntie's Plaything'

What a lucky girl to have such a wonderful aunt. Excellent story, I hope there are going to be some more chpaters about Alicia, her female relations and uni girlfriends.

Decet story, but all too brief. You could've stretched out Alicia's uncertainty, and gone into a lot more detail about what the women got up to. There's at least two - probably three - chapters' worth of story crammed into this one piece.

Thanks for taking time to comment on my story. I might agree that the story could have been drawn out, but hindsight is foresight. Sometimes erotica can be too long and you lose the reader. I do write to entertain and I also write for publications (which included this one) where I have word limits. When I write for LIT, I have a bit more freedom, but I also want the readers here to see stories I had fun with, which included this one. Is there a sequel here? Perhaps.

There was a comment earlier that I deleted, because I don't particularly like people giving negative comments and hiding behind anonimity. If the comments are valid and make a well-defined point (as do the ones I previously addressed) then stay they will. But just posting "Crap" shows a lack of intellect I cannot and will not respect.

Feel free to send me comments through E-Mail as well. I enjoy hearing from my readers.

The story is what it was, just great sex and it left me wanting much much more!

Please consider writing a few more chapters!

I read this story because of the tag "dominance". It's my opinion, that there could have been a bit more of it. But that's only my fetish. ;-)

Great written story, I have to say.

Nice healthy story, But it could of used more Dominance by AUNT & more reluctance, controlled, submissiveness, etc. by niece.

Also, the virginity part seriously bothered me.(it is surprising a girl out of high school in this day & age is still a virgin, BUT that is a great thing!!! Too many children these days are having sex at 11,12,13 years of age now.) So it was great that the niece was still a virgin.

But the aunt should of paid heed to that point in particular. Young (and old) women can play all the reindeer(scratch that) Lesbian games without being penetrated with anything more than a tongue or a finger.(sex toys such as vibrators can be used on the labia and clit, on the outside of the vagina) Plus if auntie really wanted to introduce a strap-on, auntie could of taught niecie how to suck, B.J., deep throat and if really need be how to take it in her virgin ass. Auntie could of taught niece how to strap it on and fuck others in their mouths, pussies, asses(even the boy next door). Without giving up the young niece's flower.

The virgin is a very special gift and should be given to a man.(especially since the niece likes boys and was looking for one that summer).It could be to a boyfriend, her husband on a weeding night, a secret lover, a birthday gift, or (sounds like Auntie has many friends maybe very rich friends) to a lord of the manor, a very rich, powerful guy for a virgin sacrifice, etc. There are many possibilities with a virgin gift. To be taken, spoiled and corrupted for the first time by a piece of plastic made in china, without any ceremony or pompt & circumstance is Unthinkable!

The last Virgin I had was in her thirties. She was saving herself for the right man (her husband) but I finally convinced her (I was the right man) after dating for awhile. She told me she had a gift for me, so in my birthday card she wrote a note of promise to give me her virginity. So I planned it for the Spring and took her away, planning every detail to make it special for her (and of course me).

It was a gift, a ceremony that neither of us will forget. She retells the story of our weekend to her girfriends all the time.9

As I mentioned in the previous comment I made, I do write to entertain. You're weaving a fantasy, I try at times to straddle the line between "porn" and "erotica / reality". Were I to write a sequel, I might stretch it - I might not. Generally, the readers liked it.

I can tell you I know my share of post high-school virgins and not all are "saving it" for a special occasion. Some just haven't met a person they are interested in sexually at that point and when they do, their sexuality emerges.

Glad that your lover still talks of your time together, that must be flattering.

I did read this and the "sort of" sequel to this and I loved both. I really wish there was a sequel with the mom when she got off the bus. That would have made my day. Really like your works.

Just kinda stupid and ugly. What could have been sexy turned raunchy and then just twisted. No real point to it.