All Comments on 'High School Dates Ch. 13'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Seems like all the females are hot to trot!

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Storyteller0112Storyteller0112about 1 year ago

A "4" may be a bit generous, but I did not want to be "that guy". This is becoming a bit less entertaining as the chapter count increases. I hope you can put some more engaging content in the future chapter(s).

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticabout 1 year ago

It's a pity (for me) there's so much cheating... Anyway, it's the author's story, and if that's what he wants...

Daddydodaddy78Daddydodaddy78about 1 year ago

Amazing work please keep it up

monkeykinglivesmonkeykinglivesabout 1 year ago

Um... same old gravy on the same old meat. 3.

Bammerman76Bammerman76about 1 year ago

Failing to see any romance here, more of the MC just sticking his dick in anything that moves. I didn't even read this whole thing and won't read anymore. Nothing wrong with your writing so I won't rate this to lower the score. I'll check out when you post something different

BruceWoBruceWoabout 1 year ago

Loved it.

My mum would have shut the door.

ImNext morning she would then say "you should bring your girlfriend for lunch or dinner next week".

shadrachtshadrachtabout 1 year ago

Poor kid never seems to get to have much agency in his life. The one time he's active instead of reactive this chapter and he accidentally has sex with his girlfriend's twin. Can't blame him there, if they never told him at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story. Can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 14. David should have sex with a other girl before he leaves for summer and not use a condom and do a pregnancy scare with her. Or maybe Tina's mom or sister. Or a pregnancy scare with Tina when they are back at schol after the summer. Or better yet a pregnancy scare with Patty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This series had so much potential, I will just read the part where Betsy and David are finally together. Poor writing in terms of the plot

davp6255davp625512 months ago

What a fun filled life David has. Is there a woman that he cannot fuck? love this tale

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Off the rails as a romance story. Should be in a different catogory.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Anon, no firmly on the rails, still predictable, but quicker - a dick dip on every page.

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