All Comments on 'Honeymoon Hotel'

Get an editor!

Suggest you have someone edit for grammar, spelling and usage as they all distract from the story........story, story, story, "usage mistake", story, story, "grammar mistake", etc, etc, etc. Literotica has spellchecker built in so there shoudn't be a poblem with seeing/fining erors in the righting.......see what I mean?

Story is good were it not for those flaws.