All Comments on 'Interstellar Impregnation Pt. 01'

LOL

Different to say the least.

A little short but hot. Not my normal genre but you are making it interesting. Lets see where you take us on this "Magic Carpet Ride"! 5 stars on both chapters ready for Chapter 3!

Cheers

SAGE

Real hot! Exceeded my expectations with the romance, thanks so much for that, it made the story special and extraordinary. 5/5 Thanks for this!

Noah and Chloe have to make Noah Jr. soon.

Difficult figuring out what this has to do with the rest of the story: "the majority of the mainstream media"

"I can't say it's not uncomfortable," Noah said. << must have stared at that for several minutes, trying to untangle the multiple negatives and decide if I was parsing it correctly, or you had even written it correctly, then if your meaning was what I assumed it was. Very awkward choice of words. Then there is "me neither" which is totally broken. Then again, so is the 'more proper' form "me either" but still, it's not grammatically correct. "Neither do I" is probably the simplest way to make it not sound like the dialogue comes from someone that would never pass that English class they shared together.

I usually don't go into this kind of story.

I have a real problem with forced, coerced, and manipulation... Especially on this type of scale. But I love your writing and I can't help but find it hot. That being said I still hold out hope that at some point maybe one of the jerky jocks or even Ollie and or Noah get ahold of those the forced them into this at beats their ass. I don't care what it's supposed to be for... Asses need kicked for this.

Looking forward to more. Twisted but heart-warming …so far.

Great premise. Excellent follow through. I'm looking forward to getting know your characters better and see what kind of hijinks they engage in during their trip and their "resettlement".

Can't wait to read the rest of the story!

If you only do one couple per chapter this is going to take months to complete, no? I’m really looking forward to the ones who are paired with their girlfriend’s/boyfriend’s best friend. I hope those come soon

Next chapter please. Enjoyed this one. AAAA+++++

Maybe it's just me but I'd love to hear about Liv and Ollie

That was boring. I'll try the next chapter to see if it improves. If not, I'm out of here. 3 stars.

Great next step.

This was a sweet simple way to start off. Friends obviously falling in love. It's safe. Can't wait for the taboo ones though.

Awesome work! Hope it takes for Chloe, hope there is an update as I keep reading!

It's okay. I've definitely read better on this site, but it's clear you've put effort into it and, unlike 90% of the stories you read here, the grammar is decent (thank fuck).

6.5/10 so far.

I loved Chloe and Noah's coupling! Plenty of detail on how both thought and it was glorious. 5

This is a fun fantasy idea for a story. It leaves so many possibilities. You have an excellent imagination for far-fetched but erotic story premises.

Breaking the friend zone

really nice but FOR GOD'S SAKE WHY MALE CHARACTER NEEDS TO BE SUCH A PUSSY?! Even when she was already way into rutting, he was like "but... are you sure...? dont wanna hurt you...". Dammit, human race would go extinct by now if all males were such pussies!

Great stuff! And the humor was some of the best I've read here. Hell, anywhere! You are truly talented and I absolutely look forward to the next chapters. I'm not sure whether I laughed loudest about being asked to keep it down after farting in the movie theater or Chloe's comment that, if he didn't start fucking her hard, NOW, she was going to break off his dick and stab him in the chest with it. And those are just two of many. A pleasure to read. And the sex was great too!