All Comments on 'Jennifer'

You delivered another great story, a compact one but no less entertaining.

A very good story, small but good...

need more storys like that....

...although a bit rushed. Dylan's backstory and bad luck with women sells well, and while Jennifer setting these up for him seems plausible as possible reflections of her, their joining feels quick--right after him breaking up with the twins, he starts with her. If you were to do a similar story, develop their relationship more and especially don't rush the sex, since that can be the hottest part. Solid 4.

Another excellent story

he is a dumb ass i mean come on he had twins guys you kno what i mean but its a really good story :)

such a well written story I would like to know more

No, he was not a dumb ass. He was looking for a relationship, not just a fuck fest. I just have one small pet peeve. I hate the phrase "right then and there", or 'right there and then". It's just an opinion, that's all.

I hope its a true story and wish you both the best

Very fortunate to find your soulmate

Wish I had this with my cousin jennifer