All Comments on 'Jordan and Carly Ch. 03'

Loving these two, great work, hopefully many chapters to come

love where this is going

Keep it Cumming, good writing.

Fucking awesome!! Love this story so much! Really enjoying the teasing element of the story and the one-upmanship between them, but not rushing it. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Amazing story. I'm so sad it ends here.

Loved the story.

I was deeply aroused the whole time reading.

Please continue the story. Carly is SO HORNY that shedont know what she wants to do

Craptain can't write a bad story

Well, you did put Crap in your name, so at least there's that.

Soooo goood!!!

This whole story dragged on like a Tolstoy novel, or a hula hoop, there seemed no end to it.