All Comments on 'Jordan and Carly Ch. 04'

by CraptainPlanet

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XaeroXDXaeroXDabout 2 months ago

Hey, when are you gonna update the story

Just One of the Guys?

I really want their friend to cum inside her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I have enjoyed the Is story and I understand the aspect of teasing and build up buy Jordan needs to fuck her brains out right now.

NotunskilledNotunskilledabout 2 months ago

DAMMIT JORDAN, MAN UP AND PUT YOUR DICK IN YOUR SISTER!!!!

Seriously though, props for being able to keep this so entertaining!

bluecatz123bluecatz123about 2 months ago

I cannot wait for the next chapter! This is one of the best stories on the site. The slow build tension is perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

These two are crazy hot, great story

mremrsmremrsabout 2 months ago

Wow! Loving this series so much. Can not wait for the next chapter!

ShotThroughTheHeartShotThroughTheHeartabout 2 months ago

Wow. I just love the extremely slow buildup. That's what I'm here for, in this category. Please keep it up exactly like that. This has got to be one of my favorite stories here on Lit. I applaud you. 👏👏👏

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

@XaeroXD what the fuck are you even talking about? What friend? I'm all for suggesting progression but that hasn't even been a thought you dumb cunt

ComeDancingComeDancingabout 2 months ago

Sister lying down using a rabbit in the HALLWAY!

At this point Jordan needs a good slapping to get him thinking straight.

vividlyyoursvividlyyoursabout 2 months ago

OK, the "we can't cross that line" crap has, well, crossed that line in the ludicrous. It's ruining what had been an extraordinary story. They should have fucked in this chapter, maybe even done it in the car after rehearsal.

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