by scouries
scouries, you've done it again. i've read all your stories and this one is in the top 5. keep up the good work
Yes Jim, this was another winner. A great piece of fiction where everybody ends up happy (except for perhaps the 'midget' LOL). While incest is not always my cup of tea, I found this story to be beautifully sensuous and romantic. Looking forward to your next, Pete.
Magifico Jim!!!! Bravo!!!! Words just cannot express how hard I came while reading this series. Well hell I cum hard while reading most of your stories. You still remain my favorite author so far. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next. Salute!!! Theprncss0905
Great!!!!!!! Just something, smouldering, explosive, and oh so good. Thanks D.
been reading your stories for a while now, love them. keep writing please
This is the first of your work i have read but it will not be the last. It was truly wonderful.
come on man you have to tell us what happens with maria, rosetta, kathy, her dad, and everything. love the story but alot of lose ends.
One of the most erotic and sensual stories I have ever read. I really do hope you get inspired to continue with several sequals Scouries.
superb writing, enjoyed it immensely keep up the writing. Thanks!
all of your stories are, Jim. I'm also happy to see that there were no negative comments. The ass-hole who keeps writing them on every story must have missed this one. Or, maybe he reformed and realized pure talent when he reads a Scories story. I'm surprised that there were so few comments. Perhaps they are not generated unless there is some sort of contest running. I don't understand the contests - maybe I'll have to research the ground rules. No hurry though, I still have about half of your stories to read first. I'm really enjoying this trip through Scories Storyland.
Great job, story structure is quite good, just a couple of typos. If yer ever looking for a proofer, I'd volunteer.
I enjoyed part one more, but not by much.
Wish I had found your work on here earlier but glad I finally have. Another great story but let me remind you I still would like to see a series on the Doctor friend of yours the new Asian patient and your sister. Great work going onto the next story. Bye SR
I have been reading porn since the early fifties. Your story was entertaining and rewarding with plenty of sex. As I am old-fashioned I don't like stories that include homosexuality between males. I do not hate gays or anything like that, "live and let live" is my motto, I just don't enjoy reading about them or watching them. Keep up the good work.
Delicious with lots of variety, but slightly unsatisfying because you're left wanting more. It would have taken a miracle to top Part 1. This one was not as funny nor as poignant; ironically, it did have spicier sex. But to leave these characters--with the promise for conflict and it's resolution so "pregnant" yet unrealized--where they are seems a shame.
I think you should consider writing a follow up story possilby describing how her dad takes her before the wedding again and follow up with the honeymoon where all the family takes a trip to a secluded vacation spot and intruduce dad to a real family setting. maybe, maria, rosie, katherine and the girls get it started off with a little girl play. what do you think a possibility maybe?
My favorite incest stories are mother/son and next comes brother/sister. I don't like willing cuckold stories or male encounters with males. I am not prejudiced against homosexuals, my favorite uncle is gay and he gave me the money for a down payment on my home. My doctor is gay and if I ever went that way I would hit on him but I just don't care to read about their couplings, ESPECIALLY father/son. Please keep writing.
I loved this one, and another chapter would be great, involving the daddy and the cop and all three women, that would be great!
"You can't Johnnie, you're penis,"
Meaning "You can't Johnnie, you are penis,"
Should have said "You can't Johnnie, your penis"
Check your grammar
Thank's Scouries. This has become my favorite story. Well done and thanks.
one of your best! you should consider a sequel to this story where kathy's dad becones involved with the family. think about it maybe? bob w.
I read this some months back and enjoyed it. It's better the second time around! Btw I don't think any sequel is required. Just fine as it is. Good story!
you realy need to follow this story line just to see if Maria and Rosie fall for the old man
BTW I've reread the story at least 6 times you really need to continue it
You need to follow up with a sequel to finish this story .. I think you need to kill off the father somehow ,you don't think you need him in this story. The obvious thing you need to do though is to give Rosie a belly full of arms and legs as well , she's the one who truely loves you......truely a 5 star story
...so glad I ran across this story again! I had forgotten all about it :) the main char is one of those that you hate to love, hehe.. Big hypocrite asshole ;). You have to love the sisters and their tenacity as well as the forward, handsy doctor! If he hadn't been such a male pig, he might he wrapped a condom on that dick and been banging the good doctor a lot sooner without irritating his wound ;)
...a third chapter could be fun! Little sister hasn't caught yet!
But it is so crazy that it is a really GREAT story! This one will give you a boner and one hell of a laugh!
I had four sisters but, strangely, I only fucked one of them and was faithful to her. I was 12 and she was nine when she let me put my five and a half inch cock between her puffy, meaty lipped pussy lips... wincing as she watched the Vaseline coated head stretch and then start to slide into her pussy opening, cried out when it punched through her hymen and then tried to push me off of her as I held onto the firm bubble butt cheeks of her ass and fucked her until I was all the way inside of her. When she felt the hair around my cock pressing against her pussy, she stopped fighting and then I fucked her slow and steady until I shot the first load of cum into her. We grew up and got married but we never stopped and have been fucking each other for thirty five years.
My wife comes from a fucked up family, too. Her brother popped her cherry when she was eleven and fucked her almost daily until she graduated from high school. She has a sister that he never touched. When their family broke up, she came to live with us. The same day she moved in, I was between her legs, taking her cherry and fucking three loads of cum into her. Her cunt is a perfect fit for my cock... as if it was destined for me to fuck. My wife gets jealous because I fuck her sister three or four times more often than her. She bitched that I was oversexed before her sister moved in but when she had competition, she had a change of heart. I just throw her a fuck and then go spend a couple of hours fucking either my or her sister.... sometimes both of them... rarely all three.
Hopefully Johnnie's chest hair will recover the bandage being pulled from the chest. This is a great story with great characters. Thanks for writing!
I don't know how I found your 12 and a 1/2 yr old story but glad I did.
Outstanding and humorous. Well done.
You could bring Dad there to marry the older sister and join the family so to speak.