All Comments on 'Kelly's New Hot Tub Ch. 02'

How could you write such vile and dirty stories? Couldn't read fast enough! Did you write another chapter? You are a really great writer!!! I came so many times imagining what I could do with my brothers or sister that it boggles the mind!!! Might even throw in the father.

It was really great reading! Keep up the good works!

dicinas2

Hope to see moore from this storie . The one who said his 2 yr old brother could write a better storie I was thinking if it was his big brother lol

And sister in the second. Try to be aware, author. Otherwise a good story.

You sex mad fucker you have done it again Brett. I will be acting this story out with my girls for days on end.