by MSTarot
Great authors create great character development. Your hilariously neurotic, quick witted PI (and his spiteful Leia) had me sucked right in. I'd be all over reading about more misadventures of "James" if if you choose to expand that thread, you've left yourself plenty of opportunity to. If not, job well done nonetheless.
even for you. "after the presidential election". What a line. What a story. Fantastic, as always. My Christmas favorite.................
You need to publish this. Such a well written riveting piece of work! I hope you win the contest.
Mickey Spillane wording. Thank God for President Trump
MAGA
I know you wrote this some years ago, but it kept my interest. A good story with very developed characters. Thanks for your time and imagination.