All Comments on 'Little White Lies Ch. 01'
by Mentalcase
- 12 Comments
tizwickyover 5 years agoImpressive work. Now what about finishing "My Sister Made Me Do It", "Lucky Man" and "Emily Untethered"? Forgive me if any of this sounds rude or unappreciative of your work but I'm a big fan of closure.
wallace99over 5 years agoI this series has the potential to be some of your best work. I loved the characters and the sex scenes are very hot! Please write more chapters.
toobyover 5 years agobut I enjoyed it! You always seem to have something up your sleeve, MC. Another great start to another adventuresome series. You sure know how to create fun times :)
Anonymousover 5 years agoStill no chapter 2? That’s disappointing you said it would be released in January
Anonymousabout 4 years agoNow just learn the difference lie and lay, and there's no "off of", just off! Sounds dumb, but it breaks the flow when you use the wrong words.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoA young girl and her recently new boyfriend have fallen in love, however, being a couple for only short time they have already cheated on each other. What makes this story different is he is inexperienced and she is a self proclaimed exhibitionist, cock sucking slut who happens to still be a virgin, at least that’s what she says. Since cheating is so deceitful is she really a virgin? If Dex really loves her why he so obsessed with her roommate who herself is a cheating slut. Guess I’ll read the next chapter!
OnlySomeoneabout 1 year agoCan't quite get into this. Same problem I had with lucky man, I guess I just don't get off on the whole slutwife/slut-girlfriend thing. Well written and interesting, but not really my thing. The same thing is making me lose interest in Alex's part of MSMM. Still enjoying Sam's story, but losing interest in Alex's. C'est la vie.
OnlySomeoneabout 1 year agoCan't quite get into this. Same problem I had with lucky man, I guess I just don't get off on the whole slutwife/slut-girlfriend thing. Well written and interesting, but not really my thing. The same thing is making me lose interest in Alex's part of MSMM. Still enjoying Sam's story, but losing interest in Alex's. C'est la vie.
oldtwitabout 1 year agoA slightly odd story, ok lots of sucking, very little fucking and you have a style of writing that to me is off centre a bit
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