All Comments on 'Masseur and the MILF'

Very good read.

Can't wait for more parts.

Really enjoyed it and I'd defintely read more :)

Definitely enjoyed it & liked your style of writing, made reading easy.

Please continue with the additional chapters you outlined, I look forward to reading them 👍🏻

Loved the story but was concerned at first about the number of chapters. After getting used to the character development, i understood. I am eagerly awaiting whatever comes next.

Please continue! All of the next chapter options sound like a plan - lets see what you can do with them! 👍😈

Liked it, but it is another plate instead of QT:NW. Stay safe.

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Really enjoyed reading this story. Please continue 🙏

Loving this so far!

The start of another of your interesting series I hope

Excellent story! Please more! As for topic choices, all of the above😀

Was good, a change from the normal, but still the same high standard. Only thing that threw me was the title, made me expect a girl on girl type story, masseuse is the feminine masseur that masculine.

Too much repetition, unnecessary wording and dull dialogue for my liking but others seem to enjoy it. Good luck with your stories.

Really liked this story Yes please carry it on

I really enjoyed it and was looking for where to try to answer the poll then realised who you are!! I love your work!!! I'm always waiting for your new additions of AMA and Font of Fertility!!! For the poll, I can't choose between the goth story or the ex but I'd choose both!!!! KEEP UP THE AMAZING STORIES!!!!!

Loved it. High quality work as always

This was hot and excellently written. I'd love to read more about Trevor!

Great story, you really write well. Only one small error that didn't take away from the work: Eden drove to Trevor's place but afterwards he drove her home. Still a 5 star story.

excellent, can't wait for what comes next. wondering though about her age - is she really 34 with a baby and a daughter in her 20s?

More please

Awesome. Can't wait for more of his adventures.

Awesome read. I like all your ideas. Marissa first, Eden/Rachel next and finish it up with stepmom/daughter 3some.

Love it! More please, love the ideas that you laid out.

Please continue.

All of your story ideas are a great offshoot of this one.

And a personal request. A bit of Bondage would be appreciated. A massage while either or both or all (if you include Rachel) are bound. Spread of the table, massaged, orgasm denial till full release.

I think you could do a BDSM scene justice.

Please consider. And Thank you for this long format too. Love a long story.

I agree with all thus adventures. I love to read all of them, please.

OMG..loved it but want to know what happened on the date between Trev and Marisaa

Great stroker!

5 stars

5* and I'd love to read the others in the series.

Lots of possibilities here, all the one's above would work for me.

Lets go to Trevor and Marissa next

This new Masseuse series 🔥🔥🔥

definitely more please. 1 and/or 2!

Run with it!

WOW !!!! loved the story, loved your writing !!!

my vote is for: Masseuse and the MILFS

Congrats and keep it up !

Great story, would like more, all 3 options sound great.

This is phantastic! Please keep going :)

@mytimetobe

It’s her stepdaughter

Absolutely incredible! Would love to read a next part with Rachel

Please more need Marissa!!!

Amazing. Great flow.

Great story, I look forward to a continuation of it.

Pretty sure you meant masseur.....

Definitely can’t wait for Masseuse and the Big Titty Goth!

I enjoyed your writing style. Looking forward for more stories

Keep up the good work. Great sex scenes, varied and juicy. Look forward to more.

Shouldn’t it be “masseur”, as the character is male?

Apart from that clanger, very hot read!

Masseur surely??

Love it. I want more Marissa.

Weird idea of what a country club is. Really weird. His parents being members would have ruled him out ofmworking there. Avoid awkwardmess.

Hey B the B,

In re: to further adventures...YES (to all!) Start with whatever appeals most to you - we readers will keep you energized and on track!

Great story and great fun!

Mel

Two issues;

1) a Masseuse is a FEMALE massage therapist, a MASSEUR is male.

2) Eden stated that she is 34 years old. That is NOT middle aged. At ALL. She is a MILF, but not a “mature” one by any stretch of the imagination. It would’ve been more realistic if the numbers were switched to 43.

Other than these two issues, this was a very well written story :)

Both Masseuse and the MILFS and Masseuse and the Big Titty Goth sound like a lot of fun.

I wanna read/enjoy those other three!!

Definitely, absolutely, positively, undoubtedly need more of these stories!

Really enjoying the story. My two cents is to explore Marissa and then the Milfs. You’ve introduced all three characters, might as well keep it going. At this point the ex is simply part of the back story related to Eden; she doesn’t need a main role. And fix the masseur issue! :)

Absolutely well written and hot story. I would definitely like for the story to continue in which ever order you think will work best.

More of this, please! We absolutely need more Eden and we need to know where it goes with Marissa.

Very enjoyable read. The potential connections, twists and turns are endless.

not only do I want to read all three. do them in the order you have listed.

Really enjoyed it and looking forward to seeing more

Have fun reading. When will be next chapter? Thank you

Fantastic story! 5 stars ... and please continue with "Masseuse and the MILFs" ....

I definitely need more of this story. Great job.

Great as always! Love where it’s going.

The correct title for a man who gives massages is masseur. Masseuse is the correct title for a lady massage therapist.

An excellent story. Hope to see more when you have a chance. I'm also into your Quarenteam NW and Font of Fertility series as well. Looking forward to their continuation too. Thank.

Need a chapter or four of "Big titty goth" - I feel that's where this story is (or at least should be) heading.

Great story telling!

Love the story looking forward to the next chapter

All four story offerings sound great!

Enjoyed this story immensely.

fucking 10/10 ive been reading stories on this site for years and this story is amazing. please continue this! eden and marissa are amazing so far and i really hope they gets more anal scenes

Excellent work

Great story, but one aspect grates.

Male giving massage = masseur

Female giving massage = masseuse

Definitely a hot story. I love hot horny MILFs with no attachments. More please. Five stars

I'm most keen to see where the relationship with Marissa goes, personally, but all of the options sound awesome and I would love to see all three explored eventually. Great story so far!

Five stars and please continue the story with Izzy and a threesome with Eden and Rachel. Can't wait.

Well-paced, interesting, and sexy. Looking forward to the next in the series!

Awesome job… I’m an English teacher so I give you high marks! Can’t wait to read other adventures of Trevor

Loved it! It’s a great read, and I can’t wait for the next episode. Do with it as you see fit, it’ll be good either way.

Another great one, hope tou keep it going!

A masseuse is a woman. A man is a masseur.

A vigorous head nod to more of Trevor!

Loved the buildup of the story. This is a warm and humorous story. Looking forward to seeing more of Trevor.

I definitely enjoyed this story & am anxiously awaiting the further installments. You have a real winner with this one!

Very well written. So why not five stars? A minor criticism is that men are masseurs and women are masseuses. My real problem, though, is that you lower yourself to the level of almost every other Literotica writer when you must have your character possess the biggest cock his MILF lover has ever seen and making reference to that fact every time you can. Why is it so many writers (apparently) believe no man can be desirable or competent to have sex with a woman unless he has a 99.9th percentile cock? 50% of men have smaller than average penises. That is an undeniable fact. Nevertheless, it looks like no amateur author has the chops to write a sex scene without his main character bursting out of his pants with an absurdly big tool. It’s just such a cheap way of describing love scenes without thought or imagination.

I enjoy your writing as much as that of any author on Literotica. I hope I’ll find in your other stories that you don’t rely on the easiest and most ridiculous device every time.

More, please!

Very good story. Would be interested in seeing more.

??? Did this fall off? Or just not ready for a sequel?

Great story, await the follow up

I lived this story and hope for much more. Seems primed for many sequels!

Loved this story so very well written. Can't wait for more.

I immediately went to look for “Masseuse and the Big Titty Goth,” but you said that Might be a further adventure. Here’s one vote for Yes!

Any further adventures would warmly welcomed, may I suggest Jessica’s 18th birthday surprise!!

Continue All of them

Great! Can’t wait for the next one

Voting Yes for further adventures as you already have ideas that seem to be percolating. So please go with it.

Looking forward to the next one!

Yes for all of them

Great story. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for your great writing ability without all the typo and grammatical errors I see with almost all other writers.

Perfectly written. Loved every word!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I enjoyed the story but was disappointed with how quickly Trevor was turned into a caricature. There may have been a better story with him being more reluctant to be with Eden

Great horndog spanking story! No surprise there. Always hot. Definitely more of all these horny babes, goths, milf, milfs, daughters, all together. You keep writing, I'll keep lubing. 🍆💦