All Comments on 'Mr. Lewis'

Five.

This was a great story and it definitely needs to be continued. I loved all of the characters. I could even see Cori and Dustin together.

I do hope you finish

They should've talked before having sex. I don't see how they will work out with Cori being away at college. I think they should wait until Cori graduates so she can focus on college. If she doesn't do well in school her parents will put all the blame on Ryan.

Love the relationship between the girls and the background story. Waiting to see what Cori says in the morning and how the story is going to resolve some issues like the parents and school and such. Good job, please continue

she quits schol in cali then moves back or better yet they get married while her parents are gone to barbados and say fuck you i got my man anyway

I love it! That was wonderful! I love Dani and Ryan! And Cori and Dustin!

I hope there will be more chapters coming.

Finish it! We've got enough writers on this site that don't finish their stories, please don't be one of them.

Loving the tale. Keep it going.

5 Stars.

Oh my gosh, you have to finish this!!! Thank you :-)

Loved the story! Reminded me of my first time. Can't wait to find out what he has to tell her.

Hope there will be more..

Good beginning. Ready for next chapter.

YOU CANT STOP THIS STORY HERE!!! TEMPTRESS!!!

Don't stop

That was amazing, yes please don't stop like all these other authors

great story but please don't tease us like this

I've been receiving so much feedback about Ryan and Dani's story and I just want to let everyone itching for more to know that the next chapter is in the works! By the time I submitted the original Mr. Lewis, I knew that Ryan and Dani's story could not end with them lying in bed together; they have trials and tribulations to go through, they need to learn about themselves and each other...there needs to be a solution to the problems that are itching to come crashing down on them. So yes, I have decided to continue the story =]

Thank you to everyone that took the time to vote and make my story a success. Even if I don't get into the top 3 for the contest, I still count my rating on this project a personal win!

Happy Reading!<3 [[CC]]

Love it :D Amazing writer, great work. Really left me wanting more only found this site on the off chance so glad I did. More yes please. WHAT??? You didnt get first place I think you should of :)

Letting your white friend call you a darkie is just a ha ha laughing matter

that's supposed to signify a endearing relationship? Ya'll wild as hell on this site

Seriously? Not funny.

Just came across story and was blown away. In behalf of all us girls who had a sexy history teacher that they wanted but never got, I'd like to say thanks for giving us a taste of what it would've been like.

really took away from the character development.