All Comments on 'My Cookie-Baking Sister'

Outstanding Story!

Wonderful, emotional, erotic, nicely-paced build-up, pretty, happy, smart, sexy sister

Sounds like she has great... cookies

Honestly, our hero may not have had much of a chance at all once she made her decision :-)

Superb

Five for you

This was great. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

Thank you for reposting this, one of my favorites

Way too long of a build up. Seven pages until the real sex started. Too many repetitions of their dialogue. Went from a 5 star to a 4 star.

Fantastic keep them coming.

Would love to find out what happened in the next 6 months. More please.

exceptional story line!

The story was very good. Kudo's for keeping it to just the brother and sister. My one pet peeve...anywhere within the story where you use the word "me" should be replaced with the word "I". Example..."Kate and I"...not "Kate and me". Also, not "me and Kate". I rate not only on plot and content but also writing style and proper use of the English language. If you're going to write a story, write it properly, no matter what it's about. 4*

It was obvious from first what the conclusion of this story was going to be. You could have eliminated the first 5 pages with all the stuff about their parents and driving his father all over during the summers and also eliminated a lot of the roommate stuff before Disneyland.

This is a decent story but to my taste it should be a 4 or 5 page story with sex at the center of it and not much else along the edges.

This may be my new favorite story on here. Awesome lead up and interesting story. Would love to read more about the characters and how they fare back in Knoxville. Maybe a little more hardship to overcome there.

What a great story, so go to see Kate got her Man finally

Love love this. What a sexy story. More please. I have to know where this goes.

To Anonymous who griped about proper usage, you are reading dialogue, someone's speech or thoughts, which are not always grammatically correct. Characters without some dialect tend to be dull. Go read JimBob44's stories and complain about his usage.

I reread it twice and what a wonderful love story.

To the anon talking about 'I' and 'me', you're incorrect. For example: "Things were different between Kate and me." This is correct. It should sound right if you take Kate out of equation, and you can tell it sounds wrong when you say "Things were different between I." It all depends on if they are the subject or object of the sentence. You should give yourself and 1 star.

i really love this kind of stories that work and it as alot to not only sex

One of your best

Great story and a favorite! As before 5*

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Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

Daauumm!

You spin a fine tale!

Still as great as the first time I read it ! Bravo !

Really good. I would’ve made it a little shorter but what do I know. Superb work, filled with love and joy. Stories like this help me keep going through life.

always " older brother" .. like there are only younger sisters..

Very nice, really enjoyed that one,

Excellent really appreciate your writing , enjoyed the story every bit has much as the original and I read that twice thank you

As always, your character studies have depth and resonance.

When I was a kid I went to Disney world and I’ve always wanted to go back someday but with a girlfriend. This story was kind of like that ideal dream vacation.. my only criticism was maybe it could have been cut down a bit and made shorter before they went on vacation… I also think for Justin it would have been a harder for him to give up his gf after that week but I can’t complain with how it was written I just wonder if it could have been a little different they way the Disney trip ends.. there’s a lot of ways to finally establish their relationship long term…. Kate is definitely one of the best girl characters in all of the short stories I’ve ever read. Truly a modern day Disney princess. If only all girls were Kate and not Brooklynne.

I always enjoy everything you write/post. Thanks!!

I'm glad this story is back up. It's always been one of my favourites of yours.

Read and enjoyed the original, and all the changes you made really enhanced the story. Thanks so much for this sexy and lovely story.

Second part please maybe when they tell their parents that they are together

Wonderful story. Very cute, romantic and sexy. I really appreciated the buildup and emotions between the two being fleshed out. Kate is practically my dream girl, so it was pretty easy to fall in love with her character. Never stop doing the Lord's work.

Romantic, buildup, cute, this should be on the shelves.

One of my favorite bro/sis romances on here. I do wish that there was a bit more communication and the bro being open with his sis about how he felt. Still, a good story

Very good story. Thoroughly enjoyable.

Totally worth it!!! This is a suggest in random history's and I love it. Great great work, will be check the other writings you have.