by 8letters
This was one of my many favorites and it’s safe to say it still is. Thanks for sharing!!!
I’m so glad that you keep bringing your stories back here. I just love how much love and respect your characters have for each other. I can’t wait to see more stories from you.
As when I read this story before you pulled it down, a great read and a 5 star rating. The only improvement I could possibly think of to the story would have been for Karen to have an actual orgasm while making love to her brother that last time in the story after telling him she couldn't have orgasm while fucking anyone before. The last sex with Mark after the anal sex was different than any other time between the 2 of them and her having an orgasm while making love that last time would have just fit into their new relationship. But it's your story and it is very well told. Thanks for posting it back up for us to enjoy.
Good story. I didn't like two things :
-How she lost her virginity.It was uncharacteristic.
-Mark and Janice.
What a wonderful story of respect, both went away to college and learnt some interesting lessons, by maybe the biggest was to respect each other, and it seems to work out well for the pair
So good to see this one back: my favourite 8letters story and one of my all-time Literotica faves.
@blueskymining, wow, you must be some accomplished writer to come down on someone posting stories here for us to read. I clicked on your username to see all the stories you have written and guess what I found: a pathetic wanker who has published no stories here and probably is sitting in Mummy's basement cutting down everything he reads here. Why don't you go elsewhere for entertainment, like go fuck your dog or something. If you don't like an author here, just don't read them instead of denigrating them. At least 8letters gives us some stories that I and many others find entertaining, unlike you. I know that I don't have the talent or imagination to come up with something to publish, but I do enjoy reading other people's attempts at writing.
I think I remember the original post. Still a fantastic read. Keep bringing the old ones back.
Love love love this sexy tale. I would love to read how life goes for them after college. Hope they do stay together and make babies.
So good to see you slowly but surely re-uploading some of your classics. It’s a shame what happened to you, but I’m glad it’s done nothing to damper your want to share your writing. I’m still patiently awaiting you to reupload one of my favorites, the one about the Rapunzel sister with long hair and the brother who helped her film her try-on videos then took her virginity. Can’t wait to read that one again. Looking forward to it! -flowerintheattic
This one had more emotional impact than other stories of yours, that I've read. It's thoughtful, and the Karen character feels realized. Good job.
Very well written, sir. You can really feel the dynamic between them. Any sequel?
Another well paced yarn. I particularly enjoy that your stories mostly do not end 'happily ever after' but with happy promise of what might be. Keep up the good work!
Second reading after a long while and it is still seriously exciting following these siblings as they discover their connection. And I bet Grandma knew a lot more about them than they suspected.
By FAR my favorite story of yours. I read it the first time after you first published it. Thank you for reposting. Any plans to write a follow up about the 2? 5/5
This was a really great story! I'm not into the BDSM or non-consent stories on this site, but this one worked for me because it was fully consensual and not really about dominance games at all. I loved the nuanced, multi-layered characters. I rarely give five stars but this story totally earned all of them. Well done!
P.S. Grandma totally knew.
I've never had really high expectations for this website, but this story made me feel something. While it was sexy and hot and I definitely had .y fun with it, I was compelled to read 3 pages to the end after I finished. It made me think back to some past ex-girlfriend and how I might have acted quite like some of Karen's ex-boyfriends. I was sitting here with mouth-agape when she said "Yarn" for the first time, trusting that after all these years her lover would still remember that early conversation. Such a great story about boundaries, mutual respect, and love. Thank you so much
Lovely, erotic, maturation, loving, taboo...
... and no, I did not tear up about Grandma at all.
That was you.
By the way, Dude got lucky.
Not in how fantastic he and his sis were together, but that HE SUCCESSFULLY GUESSED WHAT A WOMAN WAS THINKING!
Good read
Five for you
Once again, great characters with good depth. I find that I really appreciate when stories like this have an intermission of sorts where the characters grow independently and then reunite (or don't). It feels more lived-in.
As for your trepidations about people's reception of the material, I always say it's not the author's fault if the reader chooses to ignore the tags. They're there for a reason.
(1/30/2024) Well now, finally. I’ve been waiting months for this story. One of my uber non-series favorites. It’s back on my list. Not really into anal butt, everything else was there. The characters were very well-developed and the narrative was quite believable. He lost her then happily found her again. I felt they truly cared for each other and their special Grandma. I’d like to think she did know and accepted it. Very emotional and of course very Hot. Nicely done, again.
8letters
you continue to impress me with tremendous character development and very erotic sex scenes!!!
Will there be a part 2 when she becomes pregnant and they explain to their parents that they are a couple? Let them have lots of babies
"That was..." - "Perfect."
It truly was.
As usual.
Five stars, of course.
So very good!
With your bit of disclaimer at the begging and finding the handcuffs I was going to move on as this not being my cup of tea. BUT this was so much more. So happy I stayed with it. Loved it.
Amazing, 5 stars, maybe a moon too.
I want and don't want more, guess I'll just have to look at your other works.
This is a story that I have read at least a dozen times and it never gets old. Character development is top notch and storyline is very innovative. Thank you for reposting this, my all time favorite.
Wow. I read this before, but I'd forgotten how much I loved it. Seriously, I LOVED it. Bondage isn't my favorite thing, but my wife likes it on occasion. And because she enjoys it, I enjoy it with her. Nothing crazy, very mild bondage, as in this story. Doing something for the person that you love is sexy and romantic, like this story. Great writing.
It took me a few sessions to get through this story. It is much, much better than average. I prefer shorter stories but I like the pacing in this story. It's a collection of episodes that together make up a longer story. This encourages me to give some of your other longer stories a try.
I like the role or gameplay. It adds a flavor to the story that I find very appealing. It would be a very different story without it.
Best story I've ever read on this website, unbelievably hot, was gutted when the author took it down previously.
This is one of my favorite stories, I really missed it when it taken down. I'm so glad its back. Thank you!
Loved everything except the very beginning...
Carry my boxes up for him? That's the weirdest thing ever. And it didn't even need to be like that. It could've just been their mom telling her to help him, and her getting snoopy.
Still, that's a minor complaint for an otherwise amazing story.
Thanks again for sharing your work. And for putting in the effort to do rewrites.
One of the best sibling romance stories I've read up here. I enjoyed how you brought them beyond sex.
Wow, what an amazing story. 5 ⭐. 8letters, you have delivered as usual.
You know what would make it even amazing? Illustration of the crocheted tops that Karen was modeling for Mark.
Very exciting so well written and love how you played it out, instead of getting right to the point. Keep up the good work.
The author said that they were on the fence about whether to put a warning at the start of the story or not and that they are glad they didn't because no one has complained about it.
Well this is me complaining about it. If you want to post a disclaimer, post one. If you aren't going to post a disclaimer, then don't post about choosing not to post one. I refuse to read this story specifically because of this not disclaimer disclaimer.
Superb plot and characterisation!
Truly erotic and inspirational, it's the best literotica story I have ever read.
All the very best with your writing.
One of my very favorite Lit stories. Extremely well-written and heartwarming. And the character you created in Karen was enchanting. The chemistry, trust, and love between the two were delightful.
Enjoyed the story so much. Thanks.