All Comments on 'My Jill'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wish I had a girl like her

'nuff said

ErotonautErotonautabout 12 years ago
Fun little tale

I'd certainly like to hear more of Jill's adventures.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 12 years ago
I didn't think she should still have been a virgin with her being in her late twenties

So if she still had her hymen at her age, she must have been taking it up the ass, because she deffently knew how to fuck.

A good story that was very loving and sweet along with being erotic.

Thanks for the read

BrettJBrettJabout 12 years agoAuthor
Author comments

In this day and age, with porn being available on TV specialty channels, on DVD / Blu-Ray, magazines, books and such, it isn't inconceivable that one could know how to have sex without actually having HAD sex, I can assure you. Glad everyone seems to have enjoyed the work though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A little something more

Nice introduction of Pete and Jill story, but the eventual hook-up years later would have been better with more development. Seems like it was too easily wrapped up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice one

Beginning, middle & End all done nice & neat.

Well done

HP

GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Short, But Sweet!

- Nicely done,and it didn't drag on for a bunch of pages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
One of My Favorites!

Short but,sweet and sexy!

A whole lot, excellently written in one full page!

This is the 4th time I've come across this gem in the past few years and it's just as good now as it was the 1st time!

A 5+.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done. Very emotional, good ending story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wish it were longer, great job

SatyrDickSatyrDick27 days ago

[06.04.24]

Top Shelf Romance!

11/10!!!!!

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