by Mentalcase
this story just keeps getting better and better keep up the good work cant wait for next chapter
I'm not usually into incest stories, but this one is just crazy hot. Love the relationship between Toni and Alex. And Sam with her Pastor! So naughty, yet you handle it with such delicacy. Superb!
You have a wonderful way of making your story - hard to put down. I love the story line and the characters are so believable even though a bit naïve. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to the next chapter...
RecHiker
Yeah, it's a little creepy with the adults, but that's part of what makes it so hot! Samantha with Pastor Dan cracks me up, cuz she's sooo naive. Alex and Toni's playtime with each other is scorching! Alex has definitely turned into a little slut. I love the direction this is all heading :)
The things he says to her while she’s blowing him are awesome.
It's very naive and illogic even for a child to believe, sorry to say.
I don't like the part of Sam & Pastor
Another awesome chapter, not sure how i feel about Alex suddenly turning into a full on slut with random people now but for now its good, keep going strong and 5 stars from me.
I seriously can't get enough of your stories!!! I think I like everything except the teacher and the principal... but pastor Dan and Sam is fine...
idk..i like sam's innocents but i hope that pastor gets whats coming to him..and i dont mean pussy...he knows she is innocent and naive but still taking advantage of her.
You evil son of a bitch now you put in that the pastor is raping a teenager manipulating her you sick fuck I get that’s what you do is rape women and treat them like shit. You bastard wrought in hell 🖕
To be honest, I dont like the characters in this story. I don't like Toni, I don't like so sudden slutty Alex and her "friends" I don't like how she lets the adults groping her and the blowjob for the principal was more than creepy.
And the Priest and naive young fool Sam hmmm I almost hate her I and definitely hate Pastor Dan this sneaky woosy asshole.
I know I know it's all fantasy but... but... but...
Some people don't like the adults , It's a story of fictional fantasy . To put all of this into one story is awesome , love how you blend incest , teachers , full on sluts plus the innocent Sam , twins getting it on in bed , Alex being a cock sucking slut , to finding out her Twin Toni is a closet controller. Well written , certainly 5***** for every chapter so far x