by Mentalcase
Damn no mention of the nerd herd. Those were some of my favorite parts. Was really hoping that they would get both twins at the same time. Not just one twin fucking at a time.
Keep this story going, I have quite enjoyed reading every chapter. This is a masterpiece.
This story, along with Lucky Man, and Little White Lies, just keep getting lusher and better the deeper we get into them. You're one of the best authors on Lit, and your once-a-month stories are always looked forward to in anticipation.
I know this was just one chapter of one story, of which you have several, but the question just begs to be asked: Are you capable of writing a bad story? Right from the first chapter of JTSOU, you have set the bar, then continually raised it. So what's next in the queue? Lucky Man, Emily, the long awaited Marine story, or the oft reqeusted JTSOU in the future? Whichever, I can't wait. Once again, five from me.
http://mentalcase22.tumblr.com/ will keep you apprised of any updates that I give. I recently posted a timeline of events that will be happening soon.
I never update my profile on Lit anymore, so that's not a good place to look.
As for the Marine story, I still have it. It's just not turning out like I wanted, and I'll start it over one of these days.
JSTOU Part 2, Ch.01 is still in my head. I'm still trying to figure out what I'd like to do with the characters, if anything. I personally loved the ending, thought that's a controversial topic.
Anyhoo. Glad you guys like the story!
I know awhile back you said it would take a bit for the pastor to get what's coming to him. A number of people in past chapters have talked about being uncomfortable and skimming the pastor parts with how he started, I hope you don't write it that she ends up their happy slave, feels like that is the direction it is going. I hope she wakes up /grows up and he gets his karma.
Very sexy again , At last Alex got Dane , looking forward to reading about brother sister and Danes girlfriend. Five stars again *****