All Comments on 'Mystery at the Gloryhole'

by Jimbo545

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lantern04lantern042 months ago

I hope you have more chapters in the works.

stockingnutstockingnut2 months ago

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Definitely needs a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Long time reader, very rarely post….this needs a second chapter. In my humble opinion at least two or three chapters.

Bumpkin58Bumpkin582 months ago

Well written, fun premise. Hopefully you will continue to explore the storyline in future updates.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Hot story, cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

not bad and you have lots of places you can go with this please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Thanks, this may well be any boy's dream. Keep it up please!

Jimbo545Jimbo545about 2 months agoAuthor

There will be a few more chapters. I've already written half of the next one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

So ,much coincidence for one so . . . Uninitiated?

Proof Reading required.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very good start - keep it going

NekoNomadNekoNomadabout 2 months ago

For the love of the sex gods, PLEASE KEEP GOING!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Would have liked if it was a longer story hope there will be more to come.

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