All Comments on 'Pete the Pirate Ch. 03'

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MikeManMikeMan4 months ago

Yeah five is really not going to be enough.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now4 months ago

Not normally my genre, but I automatically read everything TnT pushes out - and I love this one. 5/5

Con6969Con69694 months ago

Such a good story can't wait for more thanks for all the hard work

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This is great. Sad to have to eat and yep 5 definitely not enough

skippersdadskippersdad4 months ago

That was cool Peter is getting comfortable with Liss.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Why is it so short

And of course fighting is not even regular or detailed he just keeps on avoiding confrontations let's see the magical parts in good use

Coochielover71Coochielover714 months ago

Really, really enjoyable story.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I love the characters of Kuss and Xill. Struggling with Loss, though: she's sexually voracious, but also petulant, jealous, controlling, clingy, and annoying. Her whole personality seems to be sex. I'm struggling to differentiate her meaningfully from Lolli.

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2024-04-12: Tomorrow starts a 3-part Fantasy piece called "Rustle". As usual, they'll be released back-to-back. I'm going to side-line my in-progress pieces and get another chapter of "Dude" out. I'll start on it tonight. Pinky-swear. Thanks for reading my stuff and givin...

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