by BrettJ
A VERY, VERY good story. How about more of this one, you know add more to it!!!!
Paul
Oh yes, please, more. You have a really hot story going here. The Las Vegas trip should really be something.
Boner throughout with this one, bit long though, and a bit repetitive towards the end. Scissors! Bit more butt invasion, also. Nicely written, good dialogue. Thanks!