by 4glory6
I like the set up, and your writing style seems smooth and easy to read. ( to my definite NON professional eyes ) The story line is new, to me anyway. I hope you make this into a series. I want to know what happens to the characters. Thanks.
I concur ... good setup, easy read .. the intrigue is there. I'd enjoy reading more about Katherine & David as well
You caught my interest but I feel there is so much more to the Katherine and David saga. As suggested by others, I hope you continue this into a series and see where it goes. Look forward to reading more.
... This has the feel of a starter to a multi-parter and I can't wait
think you did a marvelous job with this as it is. The humour of the re-reconnection. The undivided yet divided attention. The fond memories. And the possibility, but no guarantee of a future. Just hope.
This story is the equivalent of a "chick flick". Entertaining to some, I suppose, but
definitely not my cup of tea. And not really long enough to be called a "story".
More like an anecdote.
You did a great job, but you needed to continue the reunion she had with David. 4/4