by BrettJ
and lots of potential for an interesting series here, but you should have either gone into depth (so to speak :) ) with the scene involving the the two men and the secretary, or saved it for a future chapter. Also, the story seemed a little rushed. Otherwise, a great premise and solid beginning.
With luck, Patty will spill the beans during pillow talk with the ladies, so Michelle and Shana can dump the cheating bastards they're married to.
Reminds me of the scene in the movie Easy, with Georgina Spelvin and Jessie St James. Although that was a Lesbian rape. It appeared that Jessie enjoyed it at the end.