All Comments on 'Roslyn'

This was a pretty interesting story. I think you should continue it. We need more of this story.

continue so we can find out what happens

It was only a tease!

Would you write more of this uncle and neice?

Please?

Getting our interest early on, building to the inevitable "gotcha" conclusion.

To those who might ask "he didn't recognize his niece?" I offer my own thoughts having just seen a picture of my youngest niece, whom I haven't seen in some years - "yes, its possible."

Unlike Gordon in the story, despite my longtime lust for my niece, I am not likely to have the same conclusion except in my private fantasy moments. Great job, Brett.

This was a wonderful story Brett. This was the first story that I have read in over three months. Thank you for writing the story never stop you are a talented writer.

Write more, we need to know what happens next.

I reckon with such attractive family Mom and Sis need to seduce him too.

Great story, I some how thought it was going to be his sister.

Good story. Thought it was going to be a sister. but, it is easier to believe that it is his niece.