All Comments on 'Rune Guard'

Please keep this going, I really like the characters.

OK,OK. I can see it coming. Just don't drag this out too long.

I don't usually click on stories in the category - but, I know this author so I thought I'd give it a read. I'm so, so glad I did. This story is great.

Here are a couple of my favorite lines ...

> I loved his little teaching moments. Somebody, in that far away galaxy, thought he reminded them of Mr. Miyagi from "Karate Kid".

> "I am. Let's check the score. Oh! I am currently kicking your ass."

Really great!

This one is gonna interesting. Looking forward to seeing where it goes!

Characters, story line, and writing are all first rate. This story has the makings of the best fantasy I have read in a long time on this site. Thank you and please continue this gem. *****

Great read and loved the storyline

I enjoyed the characters and can't wait to read more. Thanks in advance!

Great start to a story, I can see this being a very good series.

Thank you.

Like to see this story continue and develop. Lots of fun possibilities

Very nice. I like it and look forward to more of their adventures.

Quite different to anything else I’ve read, I liked it. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nice start to what I hope is a longer story

Hey, that was great! I can't wait for more.

I hope u will write more i like the characters and i‘m curious about what adventures you’re planning for them

Very good, i hope this is much more than a one-and-done!

You skipped the intricate sex Details and stuck to setting up a new adventure story, that is great. Please keep up the storytelling and keep away from the sicko incest stuff everything doesn't have to be about sex

Great beginning. I can't wait to see the direction you take this. There are plenty of authors that I follow where the story is just as important as the sex scenes. Keep up the good work and have fun with it. People will appreciate it.

A thoroughly enjoyable tale. My favorite sort of story; 0ne that, upon reading the last word,I am looking forward to reading the next part, chapter, installment. One in which the sex does spice up the tale, but the loss of the sex would not irrevokably damage the story.

Good start. I hope there are more chapters as it did not feel like the story ended.

I really liked this, More please!

Lovely story, hoping for more!

Excellent story start, would love to see where you take this.

Good start can't wait for the next part to the story.

need more

That was great, She is going to be a bed full.

Loved it!

Please make some new stories with Emmit & Patrners...please!