All Comments on 'Sarah's Seduction Ch. 02'

... you love good story ideas, you HAVE good story ideas!! I was both surprised and pleased by the unexpected twist and like the direction your story seem to follow. Be assured that I'll keep an interessted eye on Sarah's Seduction although I'm not the hugest fan of corporal punishment or spanking in general. Nontheless I'm also curious how the happenings will develop, how Sarah will fit into the new school, how they will get along with each other, which part the headmistress and the others at school will have and so on... You actually made it... You got my attention - and that's not that easy.

than what you are already suppling to your readers ; an erotic story of pure love between a father and his daughter . Please do continue with this very hot story .

Just more chapters! You can always add some encounters with Sarah's teachers and mentors.

Please continue this story. I wonder who will end up with the Headmisstress first, Daddy or Sarah. Maybe they will be together.

I'm waiting for Daddy to spank Ms Delany. Maybe after he watches her with his little girl.

I love all your stories, but please finish one of them first if you can! It makes me anxious waiting for the next installment of your wonderful stories

This story is hot! I can see where it might lead...going to read the next chapter now. Looking forward to reading more of your incestuous stories.

This story sizzled! I'm reading the next chapter now.

This is so incredibly hot!

A constructive criticim: There's are just too damned many, "Daddy's"! For god's sake she's eighteen years old!!

The story is seductively sensual, both Father and Daughter, though a little too playful, have an abiding and deep love for each other. The Catholic Schoolgirl uniform dress code is fine, but over half the chapter detailing every aspect of the attire and each piece of clothing is way too damned much. A few guys find it titilating, but the majority of males can do with minimal detail and move on.

Even with the excessive "Daddy" salutation with almost every sentence "Baby Girl" says to her father, the dialogue is good and lively, their back and forth banter being an easy gait and very understandable. The character's roles are played very well by both father and daughter.

Please don't stop. This is SO good.

Why is the tags for this story "mother son" ?

to be honest, I dont remember putting any tags on it, and I sure didn't put "mother-son" on it...