by BrettJ
This story is fucking incredible. I was bone hard the whole time reading it. Wow. Great Story.
This story had me hard from the get go. Was a little quick in getting everyone involved though, I thought.
Can't wait for more !!!
Is there a reason you had to capitalize 'gym' all the time?
The little I read was like reading a story from a 6th grader. Very immature and totally unrealistic dialog.