All Comments on 'Separate Vacation'

Alladin may have opened a "PANDORAS BOX". TK U MLJ LV NV

In the first couple paragraphs we saw "ruffin" it, "med" brown hair, "crue" cut hair. Was this a text message or a written story?

I've read this same story (with different character names) several times over the years. Most of the others I've read were well written by authors who had at least a clue about spelling, punctuation, and grammar.

the story and it's premise are as sucked as outer space (ie)devoid of any redeeming social value. use a different category as in fucked up efforts.

You changed peoples names multiple times throughout the story...First it's Jim...Then Joe...You had Mike...then Mark...And Ralph then Roger...YOU SUCK AS A WRITER!

This was bad enough. A simply horrible plot and story.

Ruffing? Haha

I'll predict two relatively friendly divorces within a year.

I would Never Share My Wife . Ask My Ex Slut who thought I would not get mad . At Her Cheating on Me

Even if they all agree on the wife swap, Ralph and Sally broke the rules by accepting other partners into the arrangement. There are definitely bad times ahead.

More details and like some others commented, keep the names straight. Didn't you read it before you submitted it?