All Comments on 'Shower Sex-Up'

This is really one 'fucked-up' family...I like it. This story was hot. Great Job!

More to come, or cum, I hope.

Superb mental picture of the hot milf mom painted here - got me hard!!

More to come i hope this was a hot story

Exellent story ! Yes, you have to continue this tale.

Please continue the story. Thanks

Can anyone say foursome?????????

It would be really hot if they had a foursome with him and his sister along with their mom and her black lover.

Although if the are not careful, there could be three pregnant women to deal with.

Wouldn't dad have a fit, if his wife and daughter were both pregnant at the same time.

Thanks for the read

That was worth every second. Please call it chapter one WE need more

Thanks for the kind comments and I will consider another chapter.

I did get negative feedback, one "Anonymous" poster said "Needs better writing". I delete comments like that automatically. They don't help me as an author. What was wrong? Bad grammar? You didn't buy the premise? Spelling mistakes? If you have a valid point, I'll post it, but as far as I'm concerned, comments like that are just "flaming" and I get rid of them.

I also ask that when my readers mark me as a favorite or comment, couldja please vote? When I scan back on my work, it does give me an indication of where I might want to go next.

Again, thanks a lot. New material coming this week, promise!

So fucking hot, you have done it again. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

Like most of your stories, this one has it all. Mom sounds so hot she could melt steel, and Lindsey she is just as hot. Now you add Celia, this young man is now in heaven. Please keep this story going, it was a good read and well written as always......LAROC

Just read this again with two of my fuck buddies, it has incensed us to spend the next two days fucking and sucking each others brains out and get a mature woman to join too. More and more like this and soon. Sexed crazed fucker Lanc's UK

Read this for the nth time again today. now going to phone my two fav fuck buddies and a MILF that lives two doors away and get her to bring her best friend, then spend as long as poss fucking and sucking them and self to insane levels of pleasure. Omg four red hot cunts to suck and fuck. more and more please, like yesterday.

Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

Using the term MILF sets this story in the present day, but your attempt at Lindsay's "black-speak" was right out of a late seventy's porno flick, ya dig?

of college. By the time I took off for college my parents had been divorced for three years. As divorces go it was pretty low on drama and both Mom and Dad seemed cool with it.

During my first year at college Dad invited me to come home for a football game. He had scored two tickets to a luxury box. The chick I was dating wanted to come along, but only if she didn't have to go to the game.

When I got home I was shocked by Mom. Mom, who had always been a relatively conservative high school teacher, had cut her hair short, was wearing a tee-shirt and army pants, and had added about a dozen holes to her ears. That first night the three of us went out to dinner joined by Mom's new best friend, A blonde, now graduated, who had been a student of Mom's the year before. I recalled the name; she'd been a favorite of Mom's and her name often came up in conversation. She was a pretty, but I got absolutely no vibe from her.

That night my girlfriend says, "Your Mom's gay." I'm like, "No fucking way."

While I'm at the game the following day Mom, her pal, and my girlfriend tell me they're going shopping. I get home and, you guessed it, the three of them are in bed together. Unfortunately, I was no Darren. They wouldn't let me play although the images burned into my brain fueled some great sex with my girlfriend and some mighty powerful masturbatory orgasms.

This story needs part 2. :)

I hope you really continue with this erotic writing it is by far the most stunning thing I've read in a while and has great potential to carry on to be even more so, hope you do decide to carry on with it eventually