All Comments on 'Sister Has a Plan'

I may be a sucker for sweet, romantic stories like this, but I do love this story a lot. I would love to see a sequel if for no other reason than to see more of their relationship develop. Thanks for reposting it.

Love this story.

Don’t let the negativity stop you from writing.

Keep up and don’t look back.

Good job!! Reposting was a good idea. Need a sequel though, Owen asking who his real father is would make an interesting twist....LOL... Baptist minister has a heart attack.

Great story and well told.

A good read. I agree that a sequel would be fun. Thanks!

Top story, loved it. Love to read more of these two and owen as they move through life as a "married" couple and make a sibling for owen.

just wanted to say i loved your stories and was sad to see them deleted. you're a great writer so dont let the comments get you down. there is so much low quality stuff on this site, but you are easily in the top 10%

thanks for all your work!

Great story. Had a nice build up of progression into the relationship.

I wish you would upload every day

Love your writing

Hi. I've always enjoyed reading your stories. When I saw your name with this story I could not wait to read it. I've been an editor off and on for over 20 years. You do have a gift for writing and your storytelling makes me want to read your stories. Ignore the trolls who trash talk what you write. A friend once said, "Write to please yourself. There will always be people who don't like what you're writing. But there will be people who truly appreciate the work and effort you put into your stories." Cheers! K

what a great story, a slow build up, Both the brother and Sister need a firm foundation, especially with Owen, to be cared for as well. A great story with hope, and making good out of a badly deal deck of cards.

Great work

Love it. 5*

Thanks for Re-posting. I’m a sucker for rom-coms, too. And human milk is the best.

5* -you deserve more …

Tc

Thanks I enjoyed It a lot

you could have added a few bad dates to enhance the final sibling union through despair and a bit of jealousy. nice storytelling though

Great work! Glad you’re back don’t let haters get you down

Love romantic incest stories like this.. 5/5

Beautiful, wonderful, exceptional story! It was excellently written and the pace of your story telling was perfect. Really thankful you reposted this and I got a chance to read it. I’m also thankful you have other stories for me to now go read - but like Bleep, I would love to see another chapter or sequel to this and watch these two wonderful lovers continue once they’ve relocated.

BRAVO!

It's a nice story with a good build up. I would have liked to have seen a little more teasing building up to the sex. But this is well written and thought out. I too would like to see a part or maybe a version of the story told from her prospective.

Slow developing couldn’t make it to the end, fell asleep

It’s not every day on this site that you have romance. Built on trust. Good job.

Excellent story, very well done characters.

I liked it. Sibling sex is so special. When I was nursing my kids, both my husband and my brother suckled on my nipples.

A great story, good for more than just the sex.

Great story keep going. I enjoy a lot of your other stories before you removed them

The torches are lit, the townspeople are assembling in the dusty town square. A barely discernible

chant is becoming more distinct as they march to your residence.

“Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!”

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Get the hint? More on Owen, bro and sis, and the nasty preacher, and all their futures. Good story.

5⭐️’s Marvin

I've always enjoyed your stories. I was disappointed you took most of them down. And I have a hard time remembering their titles.

This I was familiar with but still enjoyed reading it again.

Thank you and please post/repost more.

Excellent story

A warm, wonderful, exciting, hot story.

Glad to have you back man

Very nicely done. I'm glad you reposted it! Would really love to see you continue it if it moves you.

Decent story. It did read a bit awkardly to me at times.

A couple if things, first the story caught my eye because I'm into big tits and lactation. 2) after reading your pre comments I was even more interested in reading the story. Over all it was nice, a bit dry on the sex but that was the way you wrote it. As for all the negative comments the up side of the USA is anyone can say almost anything. The down side is trolling and critics. If you are a creative person you have to just ignore all the trolling and dumb ass posts. I think you should read Alexander Madisons post after last week's Vikings loss. I hope more people read it and take it to heart. It's so easy to be an absolute asshole when your anonymous.

Wonderful story, would love to read a sequel.

I thought it was a very good story and really liked the way it ended.

8letters is one of my favorite authors here and this story didn't disappoint. Thanks for the repost. Looking forward to Crocheting Sister, when you decide to repost that one.

It was good the first time I read it. It's still a good story. Looking forward to reading more.

The best part of this story was the emotional connection. I really don't enjoy brother/sister stories where they fuck instead of making love.

However, the big moment when Ashley/Nicole and Ryan discovered that they were both in love with each other really felt anticlimactic. I think that you should have had them flirting with each other and dropping subtle hints frequently leading up to their first kiss. The way they discovered each other just didn't feel correct. 4/5

Terrific. Well done, 8-L.

All your stories re top notch. While they are a bit long they are interesting and fun. Please keep writing...

I’m so glad you decided to repost.

It would be much better if the author knew how to use the word 'had'. I found it difficult to read and didn't get past the firstt page.

Please write more - I love these!

I am very glad that you are reposting your work. You are an extremely talented author, and this is one of my favourites.

WOW this is one great story I look forward to reading more of you writings. you should never listen to those nasty peoples commits, they only say that shit because they can't write anywhere close to you.

The erotic breastfeeding possibilities kept me skimming through this one but nothing much ever materialized in how the actual sex acts were described. It's a tough knack getting sexual passion across in written words so keep plugging away. Criticism should never cause hurt feelings. The idea is to help improve the eventual standard of your work. Having forty or fifty horn-dogs comment that it was perfect when it was nowhere near perfect is less useful than reading an honest criticism of where you can tweak your talents. You're not great but there's nothing saying you couldn't become great with some pointers. In a way, the well-meaning comments that say to ignore all critics are the most useless ones of all.

That seems like a terrible reason to not take Plan B. Lmao. I did enjoy the breastfeeding though. That was unexpectedly hot.

I thought this was great. Lactation and incest!

The way they fall in love gradually is beautifully described

Very enjoyable! Thank you, also, for taking the time to get your story edited and proofread! I appreciate that immensely, because I find it extremely difficult to get immersed in a story when it's full of mistakes.

This is an amazing story. It was a pleasure to read this.

Excellent story.

Loved it

A wonderful story ....

Very sexy story .

My hubby tasted his sisters milk 🍼

I haven't been part of the family during baby feeding yet , His other sister is trying for a baby so I will have to suckle her when she's making milk ❤️

Loveeeeeeeeeed it

Loved every word wish it was my sister

Well written

You've described a dream of mine. I LOVE to see nice titties. I'd LOVE to get to suckle a lactating teat. It sounds like 'Nicole' is a real catch. I'll PM you also.

Great story. 5 🌟 stars.

Bill S.

I thoroughly enjoyed this narrative and would eagerly welcome an expansion into the characters' lives post-graduation, perhaps delving into their experience as they start their own family (with his love for nursing and their children).

Side note for you! Please do not to allow the influence of a single negative individual to deter you from pursuing your passions and aspirations.

Don't halt your journey; remember that continuing despite negativity is a victory in itself!

Really enjoyed this story. As others previously mentioned, great character development. Appreciated giving the reader the 'back story' on her pregnancy.

While others also mention a sequel, even doing an "epilogue" of a couple paragraphs that finalize the story would be nice to me.

No matter what -- KEEP WRITING!

Loved it.

She became his woman and later in a new city...his wife. Loved it, keep it up you write very well with good thought about your characters and what they do with each other.

Cute story, cute characters! Love how they developed, especially that her bro stepped up as a dad.