All Comments on 'Sisters, Friends, and Lovers Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
love the story

hate cliffhangers

Red48beardRed48beardalmost 10 years ago
cliffhangers are good when:

cliffhangers are good when :

1. we know the resolution will happen soon (tomorrow or next day)

2. we trust the author

3. the story is so good is does not detract from the flow and

4. we sorta expected this

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
diffence of opinions...

...is why there are horse races!

Howie348Howie348almost 8 years ago

I'm still very impressed with this story, but the sudden engagement and Fran's sudden acceptance also strain credibility. Not sure why they'd need a marriage when the current arrangement seems to be working for everyone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Because...

... clearly it wasn't working for everyone. I.e. Fran.

Rapier875Rapier87511 months ago

It's all happening in this chapter.........!

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...