by TrampsAnThieves
That was a beautiful story with a lot of sentimental stuff in it to touch the heart. Well done
That was, in turns, sad, sweet, and oh so very sexy. What a wonderful story about two people guided to a love that they both sorely needed. The characters were sweet and funny, and the scenes were scorchingly hot. 5*
“There are none so blind as those that refuse to see.” The story has all of the pertinent information. It is about love and acceptance. Physical description is not necessary, ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Well done TAT! A very welcome relief from all of the size and description of every body part. Leaving all of that to the reader’s imagination instead of depicting Millie as having 38D’s but her mom was bigger at 38DD’s and John’s 9” being bigger than Dave!s 8” and leaving out all the u realistic organs descriptions made for a very realistic (albeit wild!) story that did not cross one line. A 5!
This was the best work I've ever read on here! You really did a magnificent job! Left me just feeling fulfilled, but wanting just a little more. Thank You for publishing this! I needed to read this!
That certainly was a different sort of story !
And an easy read.
Good luck on future writings.
We know they will be interesting to read as well.
I really enjoy your writing. The little bits of humor add so much to the entertainment factor. 5*****
I enjoyed reading this story.
Especially from the humor aspect. In places, it was hysterical.
The inclusion of the parts with the goldfinch were genuinely touching and heartwarming.
I did think that the dialogue could have been a bit less vulgar and more caring, though. At times the vulgarity was humorous, but was excessive for a love story.
Other than that, a satisfying read, with hot sex descriptions.
Sincerely,
B4PW.
Excellent. For me, it was the humor and the Goldfinch that propelled this story from Good to Excellent.
Well that was nice. Let's hope they stay strong despite his much older age and she doesn't get tempted as things inevitably cool down.
After the mother orchestrated the mile high club scene just so she could have a live sex show, I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop.