All Comments on 'Spread A Little Sunshine'

One hot daughter - I want mine to fuck me just like this with her cousin too.

loved the ending...so mom gets to play too.

If one thing sticks out in my mind, it is the daughter's way of speaking of her anatomy. I know this is a fantasy story, but hearing her refer to "my cunny" does not sound right. I am not convinced a young adult would use those words, so the story breaks down at that point. Maybe I am wrong and a female reader can provide better feedback! Even as an adult I rarely speak about my anatomy as "my cock" or "my tool", terms which simply sound crass (?). I may think about it as my penis or cock, or even hard cock, but I rarely say those words out loud. The character in your story MAY feel the same way, or may seem more real if she appeared to be thinking the same way. Her hot parts, incredibly aroused parts, "burning sex" or "aching center" would sound more personal and maybe give the story an extra convincing edge. (its not WHAT your writing about, but HOW the reader hears it in their head) - Ladies, straighten me out if I am on the wrong track...

good story...

Great story - almost expected twist.

Is she Mai or Mia?

Did Misty get 2 cocks in her pussy together? I do hope it wasn't anal!

Lukas

PLease add to this story

* cremed six times in reading it*

okay where's my toys.. I can get a vibrator and a dildo in my cunt when soaked enough

H&K Uncle Brett

Amazing story!!!! Loved the surprise of the cousin and then the wife arriving!!

Awesome