All Comments on 'Summer Help Ch. 01'

Excellent!

Can hardly wait to see where this one goes...

The incest wasn’t a bother - you might have listed it in humor and satire!

You're a good author and I always enjoy your stories. I've learned to pick and choose. I think this one is more to my liking. We'll see if it starts to drag as you go on or if it holds through to the end. So many possibilities!

Keep going

Great beginning looks like another fantastic series. Thanks

Good story and good telling keep it going

I thought it was very good and can't wait for the upcoming chapters....Thanks

Great story. Looking forward to chapter two.

Started following you After enjoying a couple of your stories.

Keep up,the good work… 👍

Love this. Hope you will have more soon. so very sexy.

Gotta love those Wyoming fillies. Miss my rides around WY, MT & ID. Wish I'd met Kimi.

Great read. Waiting for the next part. I hope he TAKES Mom & sis & they return to the ranch to become part of the stallion's breeding mares & fillies. Then he can have the entire herd free use.

I loved the interaction between him and his sister. makes me wonder how Melli is gonna take it when and if she learns about him and Jeni, let alone Kimi!

Great so far, 5/5

Maybe you should do some actual research before you write:

'Large Marge' was the ancient Chevy Lumina that I had inherited when my great grandmother had passed away. It was almost as old as my mom - but don't tell her I said that.

Chevy Lumina had a very short lived life from 1990 to 2001: which means production of the car ended 3 years before your Character was born. They're also not a Large car, they're a mid sized sedan with the largest engine size being a 3.8L V6 also exclusively built in Ontario Canada.

Yeah, I am a car guy..

Wish my cousins were like the story. Did have an aunt who was one of my fantasy images.

Really good story!!!!

I like the setup, but you could've stretched it out and built tension if his aunt and cousin has just started out with telling him about being naturalists. Let him struggle with seeing them naked for a few days, then turn up the heat. Still, loved what was there. 5*

I haven't read the other parts yet, but @Helgamite, I strongly suspect that Jeni's hayloft video was destined for Melli.

@KrazyKumbucket - don't forget that the Lumina was also a minivan