All Comments on 'Summer Help Ch. 02'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 2 months ago

Getting Mom on board - key to success, I think.

Excellent addition to the saga!

gunmakergunmakerabout 2 months ago

Good continuation. We'll see how the last chapter adds to the story. I like it so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I love this story. I really do. But as ex military, I have to correct one thing. There is no ham in shit on a shingle. It is sausage gravy, the shit, on a biscuit or possibly a piece of toast, the shingle. Still 5/5 stars though.

vitochivitochiabout 2 months ago

Damn!!! These people are fantastic. They may have quirks and fetishes that may offend some, but they are open and honest, respectful and trusting. Those character traits trump other flaws (not in my opinion, since I think it’s hot) because these is no deception or selfishness. There is lust for sure but there is also love in greater measure.

Please keep sharing your stories. I love ‘em. Thx

newporter56newporter56about 2 months ago

Thought it was great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Can't wait for him to bring mom into the fold, or get into her folds. All 4 women need to be bred & become his wives & baby mommas to live happily ever after in Wyoming! Awesome story. Keep it up. 5☆

Coochielover71Coochielover71about 2 months ago

Great story. Chomping it the bit for the last chapter.

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 months ago

Enjoyable. It is what it is,

shadrachtshadrachtabout 2 months ago

A little too much is told and not shown. You missed a scorching opportunity to truly describe the foursome in the hot tub, but most of it was just summarized. As disappointing as that tendency is, I still greatly enjoyed this. 5*

AardieAardieabout 1 month ago

How does he stay lubed in the hot tub?

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