by TrampsAnThieves
Damn good story! Sure is a shame you didn't pop mommy full of baby too. Still an awesome series. 5☆
Would have been good to get mum involved for week day sex before going back to the ranch.
Well done. And that's knowing that I am not a huge fan of series. You thought everything out and wrapped it all up with a bow on it.
I love this one - a lot.
Lots of hot sex and everyone got what they wanted.
I kinda liked that the mom didn't get in on it. I think it would have been so far out of character for her to switch opinions to allow that. Her 'understanding' - was enough for me.
Well. I figured that the last part of the last chapter would be about mother and son finally having sex.lol. Any ways this was a well written story. Enjoyed reading it.
You can't tell me that as horny as those women were, almost always in close proximity to each other when fucking, and only one dick between them, that not a single one of them eats pussy. Otherwise a nice little tale.
I really enjoyed this story. I like series as long as chapters aren’t 4 months apart. This was great. I just wish Mom would have gotten involved as well instead of just tolerating everyone else’s behavior. Oh well maybe that’s another story for another day. Well written 5 stars
Loved the story. But chapter 3 seemed rushed. Could of stretch it for another chapter
Love your story, so much love and hot sexy times. babies always make a romance so much better. Favourite story now to be read again soon.
Shoulda dicks the mom when he stayed in town with her for work; like i used to do mine
It seems like this is unbelievable so I do not question. I enjoyed the concept and was excited thoughout the read . I was anticipating the mother to be bred . Maybe that ws done on purpose. That boy had far more stamina than I owuld have but then again I have never had to live like that.
I thoughly enjoyed this read
Thank you for having a very unusual imaginatuion
Loved the first 2 chapters but was bitterly disappointed the Mother was left out in the end.
Thanks for showing some restraint and leaving out the mother.
To add her would have pushed an already unlikely story somewhere into the Marvel universe.
To those who wanted to add the mom, to be erotic a story has to have some plausibility, otherwise why not make every character a "well hung billionaire who can fly" (to quote Raj on Big Bang Theory).
To go too far off the rails you lose drama, consequences, tension, and humanity.
As it is, this young guy didn't seem to worry too much about the financial and emotional support aspects of having three spouses and three kids.
But in the authors defense, he did insist on no kids until after college and a job, which is far more responsible that the protagonist in 95% of these stories.
Well done.
Good, did think mom might be persuaded to participate buy, hey, it's your story.
Very good sexstory. However as a builder you stink. Are they living p the cellar? You never noted any floor joists to put on under the walls they made. No insulation in Wyoming. Burr…. He may have worked in a lumberyard but he had done none of actual building. Where did he get all the tools ,he would need, from new lumberyard.
A well planned story that left me happy. That said, it could've used a little bit of tension. The nightmares about the mmcs mother don't really count, IMO. There was still a ton of telling us things instead of showing. Still, I really liked the characters and was left happy. 5*