All Comments on 'Swinging Motel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Editor needed

"Jack tethered his resignation . . ." Tethered? I don't think so. Look it up, dude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start but finished much to fast

Great idea, but it all happened much too fast. This was a great place to start on a long story. I'm sad that you didn't fill it out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
UGLY,FAT, BALDING MEN

Shouldn't write such pathetic nonsense.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 2 years ago

OK tethered his resignation is pretty funny. Probably the best part of this story.

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