All Comments on 'Taking It Outside'

It just seemed as if the story was rushed a little. Maybe more descriptive sex and erotic dialogue would make it a great story. Thanks for the post......Rich

Good story, you have to have Travis and Mom enjoying more adventures with each other and young friends.

It was a good story, and nicely written.

But I prefer it when the son cums in the mom (pulling out makes no sense, pre-cum has sperm in it as well and can also get the woman pregnant) - the thrill of a possible pregnancy is a huge turn-on for me.

Still, good story overall.

There really needs to be another story after this one. It's a really hot story that needs continued.

This started out as one of the best stories ever, but it all of a sudden became rushed and hurried very abruptly. The characters changed instantly and did not fit how they were developed in the beginning of the story. I was also hoping for more description of the bodies and sex.