All Comments on 'Tamara Takes Over'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

A very good start. I could sense several directions this can go... Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
daughter takes mom place

daughter find out mom a leb and take her place with dad with mom blessing.daughter moves girlfriend in and they keep dad happy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Have dad kick mom out the door..

Kick mom out the DOOR. To make room for dauter.Or put mom in trash. Then dad kick mistreses f***ing ass

LutherTLutherTover 18 years ago
Great Start on a Series!

I hope you intend to continue this hot story. I can see several ways to head, but hope you take it down the road of daughter permanently taking the place of wife, while wife becomes slave to daughter. Daughter becomes pregnant and gives birth to next generation of incestuous relations...or something like that. Seriously, I enjoyed this story and look forward to your next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
get heather into it

get tamara's friend tara into a threesome, now that would be hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
not bad

Good start, repeated it's self few times, then it got going. You totally lots me on page 2, so I got a couple people to read it and they got lost too. Maybe the mom should catch them then see what she has been missing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Dirty!

Tamara is one dirty little girl! Loved your description of her outfit - I hope you have her driving Daddy crazy in future installments by dressing in stockings and high heels all the time. And I bet Mom and her lesbian lover would really get off on stockings and stilettos, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
more

we need more of them,,,,,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
ohhhhhh myyyyy ...

.. naughty Mommy ! Hope Tammy sticks with her Dad.

Good story !!

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