All Comments on 'Temporary Boyfriend Ch. 01'

Okay, you've got my interest.

I'm in

Good start. Although sex scenes were well detailed, not sure we needed so many "examples" to get the point across of who he is. 4.3* so far.

Good start, good detail. I'm in. Look forward to part two.

Like others have said similar things, you've piqued my interest & I'm in, so ready for the next chapter.

WS

I am ready for the suppressed Taylor to come out and show off her hot body at the upcoming Thanksgiving. I expect that she will dress somewhat conservatively for her family, but sexy enough to show that she can land a stud. Perhaps something form-fitting and a showing a bit of cleavage and thigh. Her date will be stunned, and likely captivated; he likes every other thing about her and now quite possibly, this.

Like the first chapter, intrigued for the next chapter, ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Let's see how it goes!

5

Well if you hadn't figured out where this story was going after the first half page you weren't paying attention. Cute story but far too predictable.

"Danger! Danger, Will Robinson"

Seriously, though - good setup. Good initial character development. You can jump in a couple of different directions from here. Looking forward to the next installment.

You have a very readable style and thank you for checking spelling and grammar.

Nice premise.

Lots of sex. But each event was too short. Too automatic. Too mechanical.

No tension whatsoever.

Listing of what kind/s of sexual activities took place, but not really erotically presented.

Perhaps there'll be more of what I'm looking for in subsequent chapter/s.

Four stars.

Good so far

Casanova reborn! Fun start to a story. 5*s.

If this story was fishing, you have chummed the water, caught quite a few tiddlers and there is now a swirl in the water that indicates something interesting has turned up. Might be time to pull in the spare lines, clear the decks and strap into the big fish seat. It's too late to check if you're using the correct tackle. You just have to hope all the knots were well made and that the lures are all shiny.

I'm anxious to see where this is going. Keep up the good work!

Seems like the tags should have included "Stroke story."

Yeah, I don't think I need to waste more time on the next installments of "the author fantasizes that this is his life."

Sometimes, there can be too much sex. TBH, I got a bit fed up of all his 'conquests'. I'd give Chapter One 3 stars but will hold off for now as I'm slightly intrigued and live in the hope that Chapter Two may improve.

Male slut meets a different female slut each week, they get together over the weekend and do what sluts do, they each add a notch on their respective bedposts, and move on to the next. Not much Romance, and not much story so far. Hopefully, maybe subsequent chapters will have more story

Off to a great start.

I'll somewhat agree with a couple of other comments... watch the amount of other conquests. After you have hit alk the bases (demonstrating his various skills), you can lay off the details and stress the woman's personality.

I'm looking forward to the rest of this.

I’m hoping he falls for Taylor and settles down, because I really like what little we’ve seen of her so far. But his long list of meaningless conquests just makes me dislike him at the moment.

I agree that "laying the groundwork" (pun intended) about Josh's lifestyle was needed. But too much is way more than needed ... we get it. Josh is a player - player - PLAYER - PLAYER!

Good start, though the MC is definitely not someone I would want of a friend? Is he redeemable?

The Hoary Cleric