All Comments on 'Temporary Boyfriend Ch. 03'

This is such a great storey, finding the chapters a bit short, can’t wait to find out what happens next. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Good story! A modern version of Pygmalion. I am very much enjoying the growth in the characters and their relationship. Thank you for writing and sharing your story with us.

Loving this, can't wait to see how you take it forward.

Great story, but the chapters could be a bit longer.

I like your story. DP is fine. Just don’t like the idea of double in the vagina and double in the ass, And also the one with a lease. That’s not sexy for a romance story. Nice to know that Taylor is not shaved.

Story moves at a good pace. No unnecessary fluff, especially like the slow boil and character depth development

This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. Five stars.

So we all know where this is likely to end up, but the journey is quite pleasant. 5 stars today and eager for more.

Well done indeed!

Fabulous story. As another commenter noted, we can see where this is headed, as the MC will likely give up his wandering eye for the now very hot and sexy, not to mention very smart, Taylor. The author is telling a story of their journey in a most engaging way. I like both of the characters as they are more and more fleshed out. Can’t wait for the next episode, the buildup to the meeting with her family is really compelling.

The graphic sec scenes are a distraction for me. 4.1*

Good chapter!

5

Tough character to like, this narrator of yours…fawning over Taylor, and self-aware enough to warn her away from his hedonistic lifestyle, but not aware enough to realize he has feelings for her? Could you be painting him that way in anticipation of a comeuppance?

Because either this goes down the well-trod path of the lothario learning to love the one that’s been by his side for the longest time, or the somewhat less-traveled lothario lets his guard down and learns to love, only to learn his love has learned to love the life of the lothario herself and leaves him to live the lothario life to her fullest (and am absolutely against apologizing about all the alliteration appearing above…).

Charming premise.

All backup setting the stage, but really nice.

Five stars.