All Comments on 'Temporary Boyfriend Ch. 04'

About time he said outloud what he has been feeling.

In a comment to Chapter 1 I said I'd hold off giving the story a rating to see if it improved. Unfortunately, it hasn't. Obviously they're going to have sex eventually but to be honest, I'm bored. It's become tedious and uninteresting. I get the feeling that you've broken it into small chapters to boost your story tally. 2*

Really liking this storyline!

Excellent!! I’m so invested!

Definitely Pygmalion and 5 stars.

Welcome Back Steve. I missed your period of silence. This is another one of your great stories, can't wait to see it develop, also how you will weave in your normal poly themes. Rating applies to all chapters. Need to be anonymous

Finally he admits - to himself and to her. Nice chapter; short though. ;)

I agree with the comment about Pygmalion. However, he's not Henry Higgins!

5

That's the kind of girlfriend to have! One that tells you non monogamous is fine and BTW why don't you spend the weekend getting some wild strange and that she'll be there when you get back. 5 stars. Sure hope this relationship works out like a randy guy's best wet dream.

Good chapter. I definitely liked it better than the last and loved Taylor start the transition to controlling their relationship. 4.4*

I’m having a hard time believing the mousy, wide-eyed (literally, after the LASIK) ingénue can just turn on a dine and within a few weeks have this guy wrapped around her finger, drawing out a confession and stoking jealousy in our now-boiled frog of a narrator. Still, reading & enjoying the story as it comes.

Nice premise continues.

Superb back story.

Anticipating more than fake sex.

Five stars.

This is a great story - really fun to read nd to see how you approach what i think is the ending.

But, you cant get all that at Victoria,s Secret for $400! Lols.

The story is developing into one that has much more depth than I originally anticipated. Good job!